RANMA 1/2: A REAL MAN
by Doughboy
*Grammar: 7  
*Story:  8 Very nice!!  A lemon story with a good story. (No plot but the
story is good)
*Characters:  8  They weren't true to the orginal but they were.  I loved
how you made Ranma the addict.  Reminds me of Jeff's stories. ;)  Only
complaint is your treatment of Kasumi.  But that didn't matter cuz
describing her the way you did fit the mood.
*Humor: 6
*Lemon: 7  Clever wordings. 
*Overall: 8 I wish lemons were written like this, not some mindless sex stuff.

RANMA 1/2 FANFICTION: "DEAR DIARY - PART ONE"
by Suds-kun 
*Grammar: 7
*Story:  5  I don't know, the story really didn't spark my interest.  The
different perspective of the diaries were interesting, but the events of the
day were not.  It is the same thing we see on fanfics and manga.  Nothing
special happened.  Just telling a normal Ranma 1/2 day in 4 different
perspectives.
*Characters: 7  Well, they were in character
*Overall: 5.8  I didn't feel anything.  It seemed dry, nothing special, just
like another day in my life.