Subject: The I word.
From: "Henry J. Cobb" <hcobb@slip.net>
Date: 9/10/1996, 11:21 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Anou... Does this mean that you are going back to the original version of
"Promise" and dropping the FPP POV that you gave A-ko-san in Part 1?

You are confusing Zen...

Zen the Heretic-

Over 150 lines in Promise Chapter One, only 13 of them have the "I" word
outside of quotes.

By my count ~10% FPP is about right.  Over 50% is way too much!

	Henry J. Cobb	hcobb@slip.net          http://www.io.com/~hcobb