The treatment of Kasumi, and Ukyo was downright cruel, I'm sorry.
You should be shot for that. Nabiki was treated a bit better, but please. 
       I think the underlying message that came out in the end has a bit of
merit I suppose, but in ligght of the fic it loses impact since having Ranma
being a druggie, doesn't put him in any good light. The fic could improve
greatly by removing the drugs and knocing off the hundreds of sexual
encounters alluded to. 

uh...i don't think you got the real point of the fic, which
was basically nothing.  the ending was sappy but i liked it
because its contrast with the rest of the story threw my brain
for a loop.  kinda showed that a man can change for the better,
too, so it was kinda inspiring.

if you removed the drugs and sex, it wouldn't be the same story!

the sex seemed to be written not for hentai or disgust purposes but rather
to be funny, and that it was.  for instance, that part about Shampoo
"almost like she was singin the nekohanten menu song while riding 
my pole."  That's not exactly erotic or disgusting.  More like...
hilarious.

I'm still laughing

signed, pnt
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What, though, is _The Attractiveness Factor_ of the _Heart Of 
The Home_ when she attempts to learn a _Lesson In Love_? Can you 
be sure you are _Putting Your Heart In The Right Place_ when you 
_Take Off Your Clothes_ after experiencing _Too Much Wedded 
Bliss_?  If you wait until _After The Crow Flies_, will the 
_Split Personalities_ that result be too much to deal with?
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