Cobb-Unit Wrote:

I will keep this story around for a long time, and every time I'm
tempted to use FPP, I'll look back over it and see how far it fails in
building to a climax.

Anou... Does this mean that you are going back to the original version of
"Promise" and dropping the FPP POV that you gave A-ko-san in Part 1?

You are confusing Zen...

Zen the Heretic-