Subject: [Comment] [AKO] "Promise", Chapter One.
From: tlsbtn@ix.netcom.com (Trisha Lynn Sebastian)
Date: 9/10/1996, 9:11 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

I know this is a little late, but it's very hard
to tell who is thinking what.  If you put 
brackets or the < > signs around the thoughts,
then moved them closer to the text concerning the
person, it might help.

ex.

"Something's going wrong," A-ko said.  <Could it
be B-ko again?>

You get the point.

Foxtrot the Furryous, BTFH