At 01:05 AM 9/9/96 -0700, you wrote:

   Okay, here's part four of my little story! Response to last edition 
was kind of tepid, so hopefully this installment should be interesting 
enough to warrant some response.

Scoop of the Day
A Ranma 1/2 Fanfiction

pretty good!!!  noriko's dilemma only seemed a tiny bit forced--
maybe a little more description (or drawing it out a little, you 
know?) should be in the revision.  (A Ranma 1/2 episode would
have lengthened things with Noriko thinking about things during
gratuitous shower scene ^_^)

Signed. PNT
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What, though, is _The Attractiveness Factor_ of the _Heart Of 
The Home_ when she attempts to learn a _Lesson In Love_? Can you 
be sure you are _Putting Your Heart In The Right Place_ when you 
_Take Off Your Clothes_ after experiencing _Too Much Wedded 
Bliss_?  If you wait until _After The Crow Flies_, will the 
_Split Personalities_ that result be too much to deal with?
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