Okay, here's part four of my little story! Response to last edition
was kind of tepid, so hopefully this installment should be interesting
enough to warrant some response.
Scoop of the Day
A Ranma 1/2 Fanfiction
Disclaimer: I'm real tired, so suffice it to say that I had absolutely
nothing to do with the creation of Ranma 1/2 and its hallowed characters.
Rumiko Takahashi did, and I'm not her, okay?
Thanks to Mike W. Loader without whom this fic would never have gotten
off the ground.
And an apology to Mike W. Loader for shamelessly stealing his ideas for
journalism-style martial arts techniques.
Chapter Four: Noriko Strikes!
Elsewhere in Furinkan High, Noriko's feature editorial was
causing quite a stir. Ranma was already a minor celebrity among the
students of Furinkan, and the "Informer's" article only served to
heighten their fascination with the greatest teenaged martial artist
Nerima had ever known. Students who were either friends or sympathizers
with Ranma were slightly upset over the article and refused to believe
its contents. On the other hand, the majority of students (particularly
male ones who had never quite gotten over Akane Tendo) felt that the
article was long in coming and that it was time that Ranma got his due.
In either case, talk within the halls of Furinkan was all about Ranma
Saotome and his innocence, or lack thereof. Even the journalism room
itself housed a lively discussion of Noriko's handiwork.
"Did you read Noriko's thing today? Pretty daring, huh? I never
knew she had it in her!"
"I guess she wants to end the year with a bang. You know, step on
some toes while we're still alive."
"I saw Suzuki and Gosunkugi last week after the attack. Saotome
must have been really ticked off to do something like that to them!"
"I thought Ranma only fought other martial artists. You really
think he did it?"
"Aw, come on. Who else could have? They were following Ranma when
it happened. He probably got tired of all the attention."
Suzuki put down his copy of the "Informer" and sighed. He had
tried to convince Noriko as best as he could to delay printing the
article until she could get more information, but she was adamant about
getting her anti-Ranma article printed and was beyond convincing. Suzuki
shook his head. He still couldn't remember what had happened that
afternoon, but he was almost positive that it wasn't all Ranma's fault...
A small object hit the back of Suzuki's head, and he quickly
turned to see Gosunkugi strewing a copious quantity of small glass
spheres about while wearing a pair of lit candles around his head.
"That fool Saotome! Something terrible will happen to us soon, I
know it!" Gosunkugi cast another handful of spheres onto the floor, which
rolled in all directions.
"Gosunkugi! What the heck are you doing??" Suzuki asked, not just
a little bit irritated at Gosunkugi's irrational behavior.
Gosunkugi pointed to Suzuki's copy of the "Informer."
"Noriko-san's article is going bring disaster on us all! Ranma might come
to finish what he started!" He reached into his bookbag and produced
another handful of glass bearings. "These Spheres of Blessing I ordered
should shield us from danger." He hurled the bearings onto the floor.
"That fool Saotome!"
Suzuki sighed and decided that Gosunkugi had finally gone and
lost his marbles.
Ranma sat alone on the rooftop of Furinkan High, taking a
breather from his morning "exercise."
"Feh. Jerks! Ganging up on me like that...," Ranma muttered to
himself. The fight had ended much better than Ranma had expected it to,
actually. Shortly after Kuno had returned, one of Sasuke's lines ended up
entangling Kuno instead of Ranma, who took the opportunity to grab the
line and hurl the pair as an improvised bolo into an incoming Principal
Kuno, effectively pinning his arms to his sides. The principal's
skateboard (with Principal Kuno, Tatewaki, and Sasuke on board) careened
out of control into a set of mines, blowing the trio directly into the
midst of the Chem Club, neatly immobilizing all parties involved. Ranma
then leaped high into the air to dodge Miss Hinako's chi-absorbing blast,
which continued under him and into the mass of arms and legs that
belonged to the Chem Club, Principal Kuno, Sasuke, and Tatewaki Kuno.
While Miss Hinako was busy draining the crowd of their chi, Ranma
descended from his leap and landed on her (suddenly well-built)
shoulders, giving him the perfect opportunity to hit Miss Hinako's five
Happo-shiatsu points, effectively canceling out her draining abilities.
Five for five.
Ranma leaned back, hands behind his head. *Heh. Somehow, I don't
think I got rid of them for good. They seemed really riled up about that
article in the "Informer."* He pulled the article out from his pocket,
staring at the pairs of pictures depicting him as some kind of criminal.
*And next time, I might not be as lucky as I was this morning. I could
take any one of those jerks on by themselves, but not if they all gang up
on me like that.*
Ranma stared up at the sky listlessly. *I've got to do something
about that article! People think I'm some kind of petty bully or
something! If I don't, Hinako-sensei and Kuno-kouchou'll probably keep
getting on my case, not to mention anyone else who wants a cheap shot at
me.* He stared once more at the byline on the feature article. *Noriko
Hirauchi, huh? I think it might be time for me to pay her a little visit.*
When lunchtime arrived, Akane Tendo found herself sitting alone,
which she found quite unusual. Most of the time, she would eat with
Ranma, or Kuno would come spout poetry at her until she booted him into
the sky, but this time, neither were anywhere to be seen. Come to think
of it, none of her admirers were anywhere to be found. The whole morning,
they had kept a wary distance from her, as if simply being near her was
an invitation for disaster. Something that had to do with that article in
the "Informer," and a giant brawl in the school lot that left seventeen
students and two faculty members completely incapacitated. *Ranma had to
have been involved in that fight,* Akane thought. *So where is he now?
What if he got hurt, or...* Akane frowned, not liking the way her
thoughts were going. *So what do I care if that baka gets hurt? Besides,
in hand-to-hand combat, Ranma can't lose...can he?*
Akane's attention was suddenly diverted to a pair of students
across the yard, one rather pale and skinny and the other sporting a red
shirt and a ponytail. *Ranma!* she thought, letting out a sigh of relief
without really knowing why. She started towards the pair and saw the
other kid point out a direction to Ranma, who promptly nodded and headed
off towards the school building. Akane quickened her pace and caught up
to the other guy before he headed back to his bench.
"Er...Hikaru Gosunkugi, right?" Akane asked, seeing him closer
up. "Do you know where Ranma went?"
Gosunkugi sighed in ecstasy. *She spoke to me! Akane Tendo
actually spoke to me!* he thought blissfully. He quickly snapped out of
his reverie upon noticing the impatience on Akane's lovely face.
"Uhh...Ranma wanted to know where Noriko-san was, so I pointed the
journalism room out to him."
Akane's face darkened for a moment. *Noriko?? Who's _she_??* "Oh,
uh, thanks! See you later!" she said quickly, remembering her manners.
She headed off in the same direction Ranma left in. *That baka better not
be fooling around behind my back,* she thought a little angrily.
Gosunkugi stood there, watching Akane head towards the school
building. *'See you later,' she said!* Gosunkugi thought, sighing once
more. *I'm in love...*
Noriko sat at her desk munching on a sandwich and feeling quite
pleased with herself. The article looked pretty good in the "Informer,"
and was already creating quite a stir among the students. Ranma was
already getting special treatment from the others as a result, and it
would probably take months before things would settle down. *That's what
you get for terrorizing the school,* Noriko thought to herself.
The door to the journalism room flew open, and in came a very
disgruntled-looking Ranma Saotome. Noriko immediately jumped to her feet
in alarm "May...may I help you?" she asked coldly, trying to keep the
nervousness out of her voice. Noriko silently cursed herself for not
realizing that a scenario like this might happen as a result of her
article.
"Noriko Hirauchi, right?" Ranma growled.
"Yes...that's right. And you're Ranma Saotome," Noriko countered.
"Wh-what do you want?"
"I wanna know what the hell *this...*" Ranma held up a copy of
Noriko's article and punched it for emphasis. "...What *this* is all about!"
For the first time in a long while, Noriko was genuinely scared.
Ranma definitely sounded angry, and there was no telling what he was
capable of doing when provoked. Images of Ranma in combat, Ranma
ruthlessly beating off assailants, and Ranma easily destroying school
property flashed through Noriko's mind. *What if he tries to do something
to me? There would be no one around to stop him... I hope I can remember
my old training,* she thought desperately. *I never thought I would
actually _hope_ I could remember my martial arts.* Noriko's hand groped
around her desk looking for a penknife, a letter opener, *anything* that
she could defend herself with if Ranma decided to become violent. Her
fingers closed around a fountain pen Suzuki had given her when she first
became editor-in-chief. It would have to do.
"You tell me!" Noriko shot back. "You're the one who attacked my
reporters for no reason!" Noriko slowly circled around the desk, looking
for better spot from which she could defend herself.
"Attacked your reporters?! Did you ever ask *me* what happened
that afternoon? Let me..."
Ranma started to take a step forward, but his foot landed solidly
on several of Gosunkugi's "marbles" and slipped out from under him.
"Urk!" Ranma yelled as he pitched forward, straight towards Noriko.
Up to this point, Noriko had been tensed, waiting for an
aggressive move on Ranma's part. Still, Ranma's fall towards Noriko
surprised her and it was all she could do to leap out of the way, lashing
out with her pen in retaliation. Ranma managed to dodge the blow in
mid-fall with some difficulty, but not without the tip of Noriko's pen
tearing a gash into his shirt.
Ranma landed neatly on his feet and assumed a defensive posture.
"What the heck was that for??" he asked in bewilderment. *Was that a
_pen_ she used to attack me with?*
Seeing Ranma apparently dive at her in attack finally pushed
Noriko beyond the point of reason. "So dooming the paper to extinction
and injuring my reporters wasn't enough for you, is that it?!? You're
going to try and kill me as well! Well, just you try it!!" Noriko lunged
forward with her pen, letting her old martial-arts training flow back
into her body.
Ranma easily dodged the blow, flipping to the back of the room
and out of the range of Noriko's weapon, which lodged itself in the
corner of a nearby desk. "I'VE doomed your paper?? What the heck do you
mean by that??"
"It's YOUR fault that the 'Informer's' not going to receive
funding!! Your destruction and mayhem are why the 'Informer' is going to
die after this year!!" Noriko yelled, yanking her pen out from the desk.
She grabbed a handful of pencil stubs from the desktop and hurled them in
Ranma's direction. Ranma stepped to one side, letting the projectiles
imbed themselves into the wall behind him, and immediately dropped and
rolled to the other side to avoid another blow from Noriko.
"Your fault!!" Noriko screamed, letting loose another volley of
pencil darts. The metal of Noriko's pen flashed cruel and deadly in the
fluorescent light of the journalism room, forcing Ranma to dodge and
weave to avoid each slice and cut.
*She wields that pen of hers like Kuno uses his bokken,* Ranma
thought while avoiding yet another strike. *She's got potential, but not
much else; I could probably dodge her attacks all day.* Ranma lifted his
arm to let a pen-thrust slip under. *Still, I should probably put a stop
to this before she hurts herself. Talking her down seems definitely out
of the question, though, and I don't hit girls.*
Noriko watched her umpteenth attack whoosh through empty air with
frustration. *Why won't sit still?* she thought. *I'll just have to keep
him from moving so much, then.*
With a sharp tap to the end of her pen, Noriko caused a small jet
of ink to shoot directly at Ranma's eyes. Ranma tried to dodge the stream
of blinding ink, but was caught off guard by the unusual maneuver. *Geez!
I should've been more careful,* Ranma chided himself. Quickly, he assumed
a different stance, one that sacrificed power but allowed maximum
reactivity and sensitivity to external stimuli. He detected a slight
displacement in the air to one side and threw up his hands, catching the
pencils before they could lodge themselves into his flesh. Noriko jabbed
again and again with her pen, only to have each blow be parried by
Ranma's hand while his free one worked on clearing his eyes.
*Darn it!* Noriko thought. *Time to put an end to this.* She
picked up a pail of the extra-sticky laywax that Suzuki liked to use on
his final layouts ("I could stick myself to the ceiling with this stuff,"
Suzuki had once bragged to Noriko). *Once I've stuck him to the ground
with this stuff, he'll be completely helpless,* Noriko thought as she
hefted the pail. *And then, I can deal with him as I please,* she thought
darkly.
Ranma had just succeeded in clearing the last of the ink from his
eyes when Noriko hurled the contents of the pail all over him. *Hmph,* he
thought as the fountain pen passed harmlessly past his ribcage. *What's
she up to now? It doesn't really cut down on my mobility or nothing.*
Noriko charged at Ranma with all her might, intending to knock him to the
ground where he would stick hard and fast, but he instead caught her
hands and gave way to her momentum, falling backwards. *Maybe if I put
her flat on her back she'll quit fighting...what the...I can't complete
the roll...I'm stuck!* Ranma held tightly onto Noriko's hands to keep her
from flying forward and hurting herself and screwed his eyes tightly shut
as he felt the *whump* of Noriko's body landing on top of his.
After a long moment, Ranma opened his eyes again and looked
straight up into the face of Noriko. She blinked a few times in
astonishment before her face turned red with embarrassment and anger.
"You pervert! Get off me!" Noriko yelled, trying her best to
wrench herself free with little success.
"Get off...you're the one on top of me!" Ranma yelled back, now
very annoyed by the entire situation.
Noriko blinked again. Unfortunately, Ranma was right. "Well,
then...at least let go of me!"
"I can't...your stupid glue...I'm stuck!"
Noriko sighed inwardly. *Now* what could go wrong? "Stop
squirming; you're getting wax all over me!" she snapped.
Akane roamed the halls of Furinkan, searching for the journalism
room. *Gosunkugi had said that it was in the F-wing, but I can't find it
anywhere,* she thought, scanning the numbers above each door.
"You pervert! Get off me!" came a faint, female voice from the
end of the hall.
"Get off...you're the one on top of me!" came an angry, male response.
*That sounds like Ranma!* Akane thought.
"Stop squirming; you're getting wax all over me!" cried the
female voice.
Akane's face reddened as the meaning of the words registered in
her brain. "Raaaannnnnmmmmaaaaa...," she growled as she ran towards the
source of the voices.
"Any luck?" Noriko asked.
Ranma grunted with the effort of trying to get up with Noriko
still attached to his body. "No, I can't get any leverage! This is all
your fault," Ranma muttered, looking away in an unsuccessful attempt to
avoid Noriko's seemingly omnipresent glare.
"My fault?? MY fault?? How is any of this MY fault??" Noriko
asked, intensifying her glare by another notch.
"It was YOUR glue; that's how it's your fault!"
"Oh yeah? If you hadn't gone ahead and attacked me, none of this
would have happened?"
"Attacked??? Those marbles tripped me up; that's all! Why'd you
think I would attack you of all people?"
"For the same reason you attacked my reporters!"
"For the last time, I didn't attack your reporters! I--"
"Ranma no BAKA!!" yelled a third voice. Ranma with some effort
turned his head towards the source and immediately turned pale.
"A-Akane! This...this isn't what it looks like! I...I..." Ranma
frantically tried to get up, but the weight of Noriko kept him held fast.
"You PERVERT!" Akane easily peeled Noriko away despite the laywax
and tossed her to one side where she stuck to the wall. She then picked
up Ranma and hurled him through the (fortunately) open window into the
pool below.
"You can have that pervert for all I care!" Akane huffed as she
stormed from the room.
*Great,* Noriko thought. *What else can go wrong now?*
The chime sounded, signaling the end of lunch, and Noriko's crew
began to trickle into the journalism room.
"Are you all right?" Suzuki asked as he helped Noriko to the
ground. Fortunately, the glue that held her to the wall was a relatively
small amount, so detaching her from the wall was a relatively easy task.
"Yeah...I think so," Noriko said, cautiously running her hand
through her hair. *I'll definitely have to take a shower before I get
home, though.*
"What the heck happened in here?" Suzuki looked around the room.
There were pencils stuck in the walls, pen-sized holes in some of the
desks and countertops, and laywax all over the floor. A few of
Gosunkugi's marbles still mingled in the wax.
"Oh, Ranma Saotome decided to pay a visit," she said casually,
pulling her hand free from her hair. "Ouch!"
"Ranma?? Did he try to hurt you or anything?" Suzuki looked
genuinely concerned, which surprised Noriko a little bit.
"Well...not exactly," Noriko said, remembering the events of the
"fight." *He never tried to throw an attack of his own at all,* she
thought. *He...he was toying with me; that's what it was. He could have
easily hurt me if he had wanted to...*
"Well, if he comes back and tries to do anything, I'll...I'll..."
Suzuki searched for a proper attack. "...I'll tell him off, that's what
I'll do!" he finished rather lamely.
"Noriko Hirauchi!! I'd like to see you in my office
*immediately!*" thundered the voice of Watanabe-sensei. Noriko and Suzuki
both turned to see Mr. Watanabe standing in the doorway, looking none too
happy.
*Swell,* thought Noriko.
Noriko stood in Mr. Watanabe's office, not just a little bit
nervous. Mr. Watanabe allowed Noriko to shift her weight uncomfortably
for a few more moments before he spoke.
"Miss Hirauchi," Mr. Watanabe began. "I arrived my office at noon
from a conference only to find this on my desk." Mr. Watanabe gestured to
a copy of the "Informer," turned to the pages containing Noriko's feature
article. "Just what is the meaning of this?" His voice was deadly calm,
which scared Noriko even more.
Noriko shifted her weight to the other foot. "Well...Suzuki and
Gosunkugi...came back from following Ranma all bandaged up...and so I
decided to print it in the paper."
"You printed it," Mr. Watanabe said. "This...this is not
journalism. This is sheer tabloidary. Did you check your sources? Did you
find any eyewitnesses of the incident? Did you interview the alleged
perpetrator, Ranma Saotome, himself to find his side of the story?" Mr.
Watanabe looked dead into Noriko's eyes.
Noriko knew that she couldn't say anything but the truth.
"I...iye. No, I didn't. There were no eyewitnesses of the event, and
Suzuki and Gosunkugi couldn't remember a thing. I...I thought for sure
that Ranma had done it."
"You thought for sure. Unfortunately, you *thought,* but printed
it as fact. You let your prejudgments cloud your thinking and you went
ahead and printed something damaging that could very well not be true.
*That,*" Watanabe-sensei paused for effect, "was not good journalism. Do
I make myself clear?"
"Un...I mean, hai, sensei."
Watanabe-sensei exhaled in exasperation. "When I appointed you
editor-in-chief, I had to keep reassuring myself that I wasn't making a
mistake by giving you the position over Suzuki. Up until now, you had
been proving yourself in your work. I let your work defend my decision,
and you had always been efficient, professional, and talented." Watanabe
looked dead into Noriko's eyes. "Don't make me reconsider everything I've
said about you in the past year with this one mistake."
Noriko looked at the floor, feeling a strange mixture of pride
and shame. "Hai, sensei."
"I want you to search out the *facts* about what happened that
afternoon and print what you find. I expect this to be done within this
week so that it can go in the next edition of the 'Informer.' A written
retraction, of course, will have to be published."
"But what if it turns out I'm right?" Noriko protested.
"An apology would still be in order for your rashness.
Correctness is not an excuse for speculation." Mr. Watanabe let his
expression soften slightly. "Noriko," he said, less harshly. "I know the
news of the 'Informer' has kept you preoccupied for the couple of weeks.
Still, that doesn't mean you should throw away your last year. Remember,
professionalism is paramount to everything else."
"Hai, sensei."
"You're free to go now. But I expect you to get to work on this
immediately."
Noriko walked back into the journalism room slowly.
*Watanabe-sensei was probably right about my rashness,* she thought
glumly. *I did sort of go off half-cocked with that feature of mine.
Still, how am I supposed to go about looking for what really happened?*
"Hey, Chief! You've got a note from the Principal Kuno! I left it
on your desk!" called out Suzuki as he put the nine of diamonds on top of
the ten of clubs.
"All right; thanks!" Noriko walked to her desk, and after a
moment of searching through the clutter, she located the office slip.
"Please report to my office at your earliest convenience," read
the note, with Principal Kuno's signature on the bottom.
*Great; what _now?_* thought Noriko.
Noriko poked her head into the principal's office, not quite
prepared for the sight of Hawaiian flowers, leis, and pineapples gaudily
decorating the interior. She knocked on the door cautiously.
"ALOHA, Noriko! Come on IN!" Principal Kuno practically shouted
from behind his desk. He had completely recovered from the draining Miss
Hinako had dealt him in the morning, and was feeling quite exuberant at
the moment. Noriko slowly came in and had a seat on the beach chair in
front of Principal Kuno's desk.
"I...I got your note asking me to see you," Noriko said, not
quite sure what she was doing in his office.
"Ah, yes, my note! I'm GLAD you found it!" Principal Kuno said
boisterously, leaning his head in close. Noriko tried her best to resist
the temptation to squirm.
Principal Kuno withdrew his head. "I was reading your article in
the 'Informer' this morning," the principal said, a little more quietly
(which wasn't all that quiet, either).
"Yes...um...I'm sorry; it didn't quite turn out the way I wanted
it to--" Noriko began.
"NONSENSE!" Principal Kuno interrupted. "I LOVED IT!" he shouted
with glee. "It's about TIME that someone showed the world what a
delinquent Ranma Saotome is!"
"Well, I..."
"Yes, yes indeed! It was a work of art! Say," Principal Kuno
whispered mock-conspiratorially. "I heard that the 'Informer' is having a
little bit of trouble financially." He threw his head back and laughed.
"Yes, that's true," Noriko admitted. *No thanks to you,* Noriko added.
Principal Kuno stopped laughing abruptly, startling Noriko.
"Well, if this is the kind of excellent work I can expect from the
'Informer,' then I really don't see how financial matters could enter
into the picture!" he said, looking Noriko straight in the eyes.
Noriko was nonplused. "You...you mean to say that--"
"OF COURSE!" Principal Kuno shouted, causing Noriko to jerk back
in her seat in alarm. "I don't see how the 'Informer' could have slipped
by the budget without getting funds. I must have been thinking about
Hawaii again." Principal Kuno sighed as he gazed at the SURF poster
directly over Noriko's head. "With this kind of work, I think I can
arrange for the 'Informer' to receive enough funds to keep it afloat for
another year. Now, you do understand that you can't breathe a word to any
of your crew or, say, Mr. Watanabe as to what's been discussed here.
Let's keep this our little secret. I mean, it would be a real tragedy if
something were to happen to either you or your crew." Principal Kuno's
gaze fell on the giant pair of shears which hung next to his desk.
Noriko gulped.
Noriko sat in the journalism room at her desk, feeling worse than
ever. *Watanabe-sensei told me to go search for the truth to what
happened that day and print a retraction, while Kuno-kouchou tells me
that he'll grant funds to the 'Informer' because of my article.* Noriko
looked up at the ceiling, trying to sort her thoughts. *Mr. Watanabe was
right about the article, though; I should never have printed anything
like that without checking the facts first. But what will happen when I
print the retraction? Principal Kuno would never fund the paper then. My
crew...I'd be letting them all down, letting the paper die like that.*
Noriko turned her glance to the mess on her desk and cradled her head in
her hands. *What if I couldn't find anything? I mean, no one would really
be able to tell, and it _has_ been a week since the incident. If I just
told Watanabe-sensei I couldn't find anything, he really couldn't expect
me to print anything, could he? And everyone would still get to keep the
'Informer.'* Noriko shook her head at that thought. *No, I've done enough
unprofessional things these past couple of weeks. I'll just search the
way I'm supposed to. I mean, I'm probably right about Ranma after all,
and then the 'Informer' would still receive funding, and everyone would
be happy, and...* Noriko let her thoughts wash over her in a jumble.
A mug of steaming cocoa was placed in front of Noriko. She looked
up and saw her layout editor standing in front of her desk. "S-Suzuki!
You're still here?"
"I saw you in here as I was getting ready to leave. You look like
you need this more than I do," he said almost sheepishly, pushing the mug
towards Noriko.
Noriko took the mug in her hands and took a small sip, savoring
the flavor. It was a double-batch, with four small marshmallows and a
dash of cinnamon...just the way she liked it. "Mmmmm...thanks. I needed
that," she said gratefully, eagerly taking another sip.
"Anyway, Gosunkugi forgot that he had this roll of film developed
last week, and wants you to have it. The pictures are a week old, but
maybe you'll find something you can print in the last issue or something.
*Last issue.* The words echoed in Noriko's head. She took the
envelope of photos from Suzuki. "Thanks."
"I...guess I'll see you tomorrow, then," Suzuki said, heading
towards the door.
"Suzuki...wait." Suzuki stopped halfway to the door. "About a
week ago...those things I said to you...," Noriko began, not quite sure
how to go about what she was trying to say.
"Aw, forget it, Chief," Suzuki said, smiling as he left the room.
The door clicked softly behind him.
Noriko stared at the door for a few moments. *I guess I might as
well take a look at those photos,* she thought, trying to shake off the
weird feeling she couldn't quite explain. She opened the envelope and
pulled out the photos inside.
*Okay, here's some photos from the flower-arranging show,* she
thought, looking at the photos. *Boy, that was a while ago! How old is
this roll, anyway?* She idly flipped through a few of the photos,
laughing to herself at a particularly horrendous flower arrangement done
by a short-haired girl. *Akane...Ranma's really engaged to her, huh? Sure
doesn't seem like it...*
She flipped a photo and saw a picture of Ranma engaged in combat
with a bandanna-clad boy with an umbrella. *What the...when was this
taken?* Noriko looked at the bottom corner of the photo and saw the date
printed there by Gosunkugi's rather fancy camera. She frowned and looked
at the calendar hung on the wall next to her. *Why...that's the day I
sent Suzuki and Gosunkugi to follow Ranma! There was someone else there?*
Quickly, she flipped to the next photo to see more combat shots
of Ranma and Ryoga. *Suzuki and Gosunkugi aren't anywhere to be seen in
these photos, so they must be behind the camera. So, how did Suzuki and
Gosunkugi end up the way they were the next day?*
The next photo had Ranma pinning Ryoga to the ground. *Looks like
the fight was finished here, but what's that thing the other guy's doing
with his arm? And he's shouting something, from the looks of this picture.*
Next photo. Ryoga had jabbed his finger into the concrete.
*Around his finger...there. A point blast?* The next few photos were
taken in rapid succession, judging from the time printed on the photos.
The blast around Ryoga's finger was getting bigger and bigger, throwing
shrapnel and broken pieces of concrete all around. Ryoga and Ranma were
airborne in the next photos, and the last photo was completely obscured
by broken concrete, dust, and shrapnel.
*Wait, if this was the viewpoint of the camera, and Suzuki and
Gosunkugi were behind the camera the whole time...* The photos slipped
from Noriko's fingers as the pieces clicked into place. *Oh, no! Ranma
was telling the truth the whole time! The paper! My crew! What have I
done!? What have I DONE!?* Noriko lay her head on the desk and sobbed
bitterly, all alone in the empty journalism room.
End part four
Okay, that's it for now! That was quite a bit longer than I thought it
would be. But first, a few concerns I have regarding this fic:
As I stated in the beginning, response to my last posting was tepid at
best. Do you guys want to see this story finished? Your responses are the
main thing that fuels meto crank out the next part. The less response I
get, the longer it takes me to write a part. So, *please, please please
PLEASE* send me comments, criticism, flames, etc. about this part.
Whether you liked it, hated it, or never want me to write another piece
of fanfiction ever again, send me some kind of response.
Okay, now about the story:
I don't know very much about Principal Kuno at all, and have had to go
from what I've heard and what P-Word sent me (thanks!). If I'm doing
Principal out of character, please let me know (specific details will
help) so that I can fix it in the rewrite.
Okay, next: Noriko's moves. I think they're a bit outlandish for the type
of story this is, and for the type of person Noriko is. Still, I couldn't
resist the temptation of having my main character know journalism-style
martial arts. Any comments?
Also, Noriko's dilemma isn't coming out quite the way I want it to. It
seems a bit forced right now, but it's important that she have a real
dilemma to deal with. Any ideas (Zen, Travis, Mike...anyone?)?
And some people have wrote me commenting that I shouldn't use so many
add-in characters as it detracts from the Ranmaverse. Well, I wish I
could have done this without having to create a single character (well,
except Noriko; I'm starting to take a liking to my main character :P),
but the more I thought, the more I needed more add-ins to flesh out the
story. I tried to put "real" Ranma characters where I could, but there
came a certain point where it stretched credibility to put an
already-established character in there (I'm particularly pleased at
Gosunkugi-the-photographer). Any ideas on reducing add-ins?
So, in conclusion, send me comments of all sorts about this installment!
Please! It's what keeps me writing. Thanks all for listening to me
babble, and have a good night!
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Raphael See