On Sat, 7 Sep 1996, Ifurita wrote:

Anyway, I really liked it....
I liked how you made the "real" characters completly oposite...Altought, I
shall hit you once or twice with teh powerkey staff for the Ryoga-flamer bit...

	I concur, that _was_ overkill :P

I knew we would end up with Ranma and Kuno as good freinds...

	The 'Kuno as Stable Family Man' (not to mention Azusa as SFWoman) 
threw me for a loop (Imagine the Kids)

I like how you
made shampoo just what she is...

	NAANIIII!!!!  SHAMPOO-SAMA IS _NOT_ A CAROUSING HARLOT!!!!
	So she is slightly agressive in her advances towards her chosen 
mate and lacks the physcal shame so common in 'civilized' women, there is 
no need for such cheap shots.

Akane comming onto Nabiki...heh....

	That was less amusing than 'Kasumi as Spoiled Diva' and 'Nabiki 
as Meek Little Momma's Girl' sections IMNSHO.

	All in all, good for a chuckle.
	Now do one for UY, BGC, or Tenchi por favor ;)

HTG