I haven't written Operation: Reality Check SO bad to receive the utter sound 
of silence, have I?

So come on, if anyone read it and if it IS that bad, I want to know where I 
went wrong (you know, grammatical errors and shifts, storyline 
inconsistencies, etc.)!  This is so I don't screw up so badly on the next 
assignment.
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Roehl Sybing
Assistant moderator for rec.arts.anime.creative

Runaway train never coming back
The wrong way on a one-way track
It seems like I should be getting somewhere
But somehow I'm neither here nor there...

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