On Thu, 5 Sep 1996, Henry J. Cobb wrote:

What's the limit on how dark a fic is allowed here?

What if one of Shamp's potions badly misfires and Ranma goes totally
evil and corrupt?

First, he'd deal with Shamp.

"I hate your stupid bimbo face.  Please clear out back to China before I
loose my lunch.  But as a parting gift, since all you want is to raise
strong kids for your tribe, I'll start you out"

Ranma quickly pushed the right pressure points to leave her paralysed
and acutely sensitive.

Ranma then tricks the Kuno twins into thinking the've slept with
him/her, instead of each other.

First of all, they're not twins.  Kuno is 17, Kodachi 16.

Second of all, how would you accomplish this?  Put a wig on Kuno and give 
his sister a dye job?

Possible alternative:  Have Ranma sleep with each of them, then, when all 
is said and done, change.  Have Kuno wake up next to Ranma-kun, and 
Kodachi next to Ranma-chan, with Ranma asking "So...was it good for you 
too?" in each case.  Needless to say, the reactions would be exquisite.  
(One last thing:  Remind me _never_ to get any more ideas from Futaba-kun 
Change.)  

Ranma even acts extra nice to Akane, just to torment her.

No.  This is not a way to torment Akane.  Of course, sex might work...

Nabiki falls for him, when all of his evil deeds are revealed, because
he's so corrupt.

Why does everyone assume Nabiki to have absolutely no heart?

In the final scene Ranma is taking the bets on the big Akane vs. Nabiki
fight.

	Henry J. Cobb	hcobb@slip.net          http://www.io.com/~hcobb

This reminds me of a 'fic I remember reading.  Kodachi leaves a pillow 
laced with one of her fun chemicals in Ranma's room.  Ranma sleeps on it, 
and the next morning is totally twisted.  Kodachi expected Ranma to go 
for her, but instead is blown up by Ranma.  Needless to say, he is not 
very kind to the others.  I think he ended up with Shampoo for awhile, 
until everyone realized exactly what had happened, and went searching for 
a cure. 

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