Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][Beta] Berserker
From: Don Wang
Date: 9/6/1996, 3:56 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

This wasn't that bad.  However, the second-person style is hard to
follow and rather awkward at times.
 



Don Wang <dwang@sprynet.com>, Vice President of AFSS, member of RPGA and
COR, Self-appointed Protector/Defender/Guardian of Akane Tendo, a
faithful Square and Ranma 1/2 fan