It is really hard to follow the story because there is no
identification of who's speaking.  It is not bad, but really nothing
more than a revision of the first chapter plus some of Ranma's adventure
in China with a different perspective.  I don't know how you want to
continue this...
 



Don Wang <dwang@sprynet.com>, Vice President of AFSS, member of RPGA and
COR, Self-appointed Protector/Defender/Guardian of Akane Tendo, a
faithful Square and Ranma 1/2 fan