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From: 	wrobert2@rs5.tcs.tulane.edu on behalf of St. Suika Roberts
Sent: 	Monday, September 02, 1996 7:00 PM
To: 	fanfic@fanfic.com
Subject: 	[FFML] [FFML][fanfic] Ranma, why . . .

	I've had this for a little while, so I decided to see what the
responce would be.

	I came up with the idea in a fit of silliness over a year ago,
and finally got ti typed in Friday night.  I haven't edited it since,
so C&C is quite welcome.

I found it a tad hard to keep up with who was talking in some parts, maybe you 
should add more 'indicators' into the speaking. (Ranma said... stuff like 
that) I found the Ukyou/Kodachi part... odd, and off of the origional 
storyline. Maybe some more development and it'll make a good short read. If 
you wanted something that I would save to my hard drive, take the stuff about 
Ranma having the kid and make it into a full blown fic about Ranma's 
adventures as a pregnant woman. (Hey, are there any other ideas left that 
haven't been used?)