Thank you for the explanation at the end.  For a moment, I was wondering 
what I was reading.  That looked like some twisted 
WOT-Ranma-Akira-Mai-whoknowswhat crossover.  Overall, it looked good, 
especially the descriptions going through "Kaneda"'s head when the 
One Power was called.  However, it might be a good idea to clear up 
who's who and what's what over the other chapters.   

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Nicholas Leifker, aka "Nightelf"
nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu
"Pronouns are so _difficult_ with these characters..."
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------