On Wed, 4 Sep 1996, Nightelf wrote:
Thank you for the explanation at the end. For a moment, I was wondering
what I was reading. That looked like some twisted
WOT-Ranma-Akira-Mai-whoknowswhat crossover. Overall, it looked good,
especially the descriptions going through "Kaneda"'s head when the
One Power was called. However, it might be a good idea to clear up
who's who and what's what over the other chapters.
Ideally, it will be cleared up :)
I hope chapter 2 helps some :)
John Walter Biles : MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas
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"It's good to kill the King." "I still think the Saxons should have
put a higher price on our heads. I'm more valuable than 25 librum."
--Frequent quotes from our PENDRAGON sessions.