Overall, the style of it is done well, but it seems to be a little too 
close to the original.  More drastic variations are in order than Ranma 
telling the truth to Akane early.  If you keep on going along this path, 
drifting further and further from the original to see what differences it 
would have caused, then it might work.

More C&C is coming for other stuff - after I take a nap. 

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Nicholas Leifker, aka "Nightelf"
nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu
"Pronouns are so _difficult_ with these characters..."
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