Subject: [C&C]Slashtooth's Semi Daily Reviews
From: Slashtooth@evnet.com
Date: 9/4/1996, 11:08 PM
To: Fanfic@fanfic.com

Ok!  Here we go again!  Welcome to Slashtooth's Semi Daily Reviews!

Slashtooth:  Welcome!  Our first fic today is The Adventures of Chan And
Chan.  It is an interesting deviation into the origions of the Ranma
Saga, but it needed to settle on a style.  It seemed to jump from script
style to first to second to third person style in the middle of
sentences.

Ridgewolfe:  I thought it was barren of detail.  I've always liked the
concept of the alternate realities, but this had a chain letter writing
feel to it.  Lets see what happens after the next few parts.  For right
now, though, Thumbs down.

Slashtooth:  I agree.  Thumbs down.  The Author or Authors need to
settle on one style of writing.

Ridgewolfe:  Next, Facade.  When we read this Fic, it was the unrevised
copy that was mistakenly sent to us from the author.  the author sent us
the revised fic, and it was better.  The profanity was removed, well, a
lot of it, anyway.  I liked the potential for character development
presented for Nabiki, and the fact that Kuno kicked Butt was cool! 
Ukyou comforting Akane was something I could see, Ukyou doesn't hate
Akane, they are just rivals for Ranma.  Thumbs up from me, and I want
the next part!  (please?)

Slashtooth:  I thought the fic went far beyond the borders of Nabiki's
character.  She has never taken photos of Akane in anything other than
her workout clothes or normal clothes (As far as I could tell)  and
pictures of Ranma, well, Ranma never has had much modesty in his female
form.  The picture was the focal point of the story, but I just cannot
see Nabiki taking those photos.  Although the interplay between Ukyou
and Akane was nice, the underlying premise of Nabiki taking the photo
and the fact that there was someone in the school that was evil enough
to do something like that really turned me off.  This could almost
qualify as a darkfic, without the blood and gore usually associated with
it.  Thumbs down from me.  Mayhap the next parts will make it better,
and if that is the case, a updated review will be released.

Ridgewolfe:  He does go on, don't he?  Next, Boy Side/Girl Side.  We
only have this one part of it, so if the author could send us the rest
of it, we would be thankful.  However, we are going to review it, as
this seems like it could be a stand alone fic once you have read it all
the way through.  I liked the Ukyou curse, and the different feelings
between Ranma and Akane, but I would like to see all of it before I say
any more.  Thumbs up, for now

Slashtooth:  If the reader has an understanding of the Wheel of Time,
the story is much better.  I liked it.  The switching between worlds was
a bit disconcerting, but there wasn't really any other way to do it
well.  Interesting with Akane (Kaneda) in the WoT world, I think she is
finally realising what Ranma has had to go through.  Good story.  I
can't wait for more (Or the first part).  Thumbs up.

Slashtooth:  Also, we have been asked to review Scoop of the day.  I am
the only one to have read it here (So far), do I will give my feelings
on the story.  I like it, although in Part two, Noriko tends to go
overboard with her obsession with Ranma.  One would almost think that
she was one of Ranma's sutors, considering all of the energy she is
putting toward to nailing him.  :)  Of course, One can only hope that
when she calms down enough to notice what she has wrought with her
stories, she realizes the mistakes she has made.  Here's waiting for
Part four, and (hopefully) a happy ending (eventually)!

Well, that's all for this edition.  As always, our reviewing policies. 
We dump all the Fanfics into one folder, sort them by subject, and
review them as we empty the folder from the top.  If you haven't seen
your Fanfic here, it doesn't mean we passed it, it's just buried in our
folder.  If you just can't wait, or have a fanfic that we might not have
and want it(them) reviewed, just drop us a line, and we will review it
A.S.A.P.!
-- Slashtooth@evnet.com "Chew 'em up and Spit 'em out, That's what Fanfics are all about!" Reviewer at large.