| Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] Dear Diary (beta) |
| From: Cynewulf |
| Date: 9/3/1996, 10:31 PM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
Good story... I liked it. Ranma's short, simple sentences suited him... it made a nice contrast with the three earlier diary entries. Would've maybe been nice to see an aspect of himself that he reveals to his diary, but not in public, though. Great ending. (He keeps a tally of his free meals?) -Mike