Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] Dear Diary (beta)
From: Cynewulf
Date: 9/3/1996, 10:31 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


	Good story... I liked it.
	Ranma's short, simple sentences suited him... it made a nice 
contrast with the three earlier diary entries.  Would've maybe been nice 
to see an aspect of himself that he reveals to his diary, but not in 
public, though.
	Great ending. (He keeps a tally of his free meals?)

	-Mike