>From what I've seen, it's okay.  I tend to prefer 'fics with a little 
more thought and emotion in them, rather than a lot of action, so this 
one really didn't impress me very much.  That is, however, my personal 
taste, rather than anything wrong with the 'fic. 

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Nicholas Leifker, aka "Nightelf"
nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu
"Pronouns are so _difficult_ with these characters..."
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