Excellent first part - I read it with a bit of trepidation 'cos I 
found Sunrise a bit depressing - aka I'm not really into characters  
( especially Akane ) dying. The idea is more of the Chinese one of 
allowing one half of couple to die whilst the other lives on in 
emotional pain wanting revenge. Not my style but it suits my current 
mood :-)
    I look forward to Chapter 2!!
    
Martin
    
Unfortunately this sig. file has been classified
TOP SECRET. I mean, I could let you see it, but
then I'd have to kill you.