Date: Mon, 02 Sep 1996 21:36:30 -0400
   From: PhoneyNT <we436@freenet.victoria.bc.ca>

   At 07:00 PM 9/2/96 -0500, you wrote:
   >	I've had this for a little while, so I decided to see what the
   >responce would be.
   >
   >	I came up with the idea in a fit of silliness over a year ago,
   >and finally got ti typed in Friday night.  I haven't edited it since,
   >so C&C is quite welcome.

   you need to redo a lot of this.  i got kind of lost after a few pages.
   the whole thing is confusing.

Well, I followed it, more or less, although (mostly) understanding
Evangelionn 24-26 probably put me in practice (and increased my
tolerance for not getting everything explained :-).

   still, i like the idea of Ranma doing maternal stuff ^_^

Indeed; this is such a RAA cliche (at *least* five years running) it's
time someone do the definitive Ranma gets pregnant story.  This would
be a good approach, and an Rh factor screwup would be a good excuse.

					- Harold