Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C] R. Lawson's Ranma Fic, Part 2
From: bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian Weinberg)
Date: 9/2/1996, 3:07 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com
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bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de

 On Sat, 31 Aug 1996 00:18:41 -0400 Taleswapper said:

: R. Lawson's Ranma 1/2 Fan Fiction, Part 2

: I was displeased by Ranma's full and specific explanation of 
: his curse's purpose to Kodachi in "Dying of the Rose."  The 
: great detail seems excessive, ruining the engaging new ambience 
: of mystery that Lawson created for the curse in TIL.  Moreover, 
: the future history of how the curse has directed Ranma's life 
: is disappointingly mundane and unimaginative.  The story of 
: Ranma as a mystically steered troubleshooter does not live up 
: to Mousse's grand prediction of a great future for Ranma, and 
: it reminds me very much of the plot of the TV series "Quantum 
: Leap."

This is where I differ.  I *particularly* like the fact that
Ranma's destiny did *not* turn out to be "The Savior of the World"
(Sorry, Richard. :)

In fact I *dreaded* that Richard was going to go that way, when I
first read it in _Thy Inward Love_, and I was tremendously
relieved, when I saw _The Dying of the Rose_.  I am very grateful
that Richard chose to keep Ranma's adventures the way they were in
the manga - always on a deeply involved *personal* level.  Ranma
never fought for some abstract ideals, and I couldn't imagine him
fighting for "good" against "evil" or something like that.  I
cherish the thought that Ranma is a sort of wild card, now, who
turns up in impossible situations, helping where nobody else
could.

I guess it's all down to personal taste in this case.  I *do*
agree, though that Ranma's explanation was to direct and detailed.
Richard should have left it more mysterious.


: In reading TIL and the related stories, I sensed an important 
: running theme that Lawson has given only incidental attention.  
: Forgiveness and redemption are central to several of the 
: plotlines in Lawson's stories, yet the author does not take 
: advantage of the many opportunities to emphasize their 
: importance as virtues, inspirations, spiritual awakenings, or 
: what-have-you. Redemption shows up most starkly in the "The 
: Right Side of the Ledger," where Nabiki is made to see the evil 
: of her ways after a nightmarish vision.  She feels a necessity 
: to change, and yet articulates no explanation for that 
: necessity.  In TIL, Akane and Ranma forgive multiple acts of 
: violence and violation against them; this superhuman grace 
: ought to have been explored and celebrated.

Ah, but one peculiar thing about _Ranma 1/2_ is, that the
characters almost instantly forgive whatever crimes have been
committed against them.  This furthers the impression, that deep
down all of the characters know that they don't *really* want to
hurt each other.


Sebastian
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