I like NextGen stories, and this one, so far, looks like it could 
be the best of the crop (loath as I am to admit it).
	I do wonder a bit at the power levels displayed.  Casual use of 
Chi-bolts and special moves can make the story read like a video game.  I 
suggest toning things down a bit, or being more moderate.
	Your take on Ranma shows him to be quite the playboy.  Did Ukyou 
leave "for family" or because she was in a family way?  If Kodachi 
appears with a child, I will be very, very frightened.
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