Ok, I know this is a little late, but I didn't really get around to 
reading fics till 3 days before school starts. Anyway, I jsut read As the 
Crow Flies.

Man, this was so dark, I had to adjust the brightness of my monitor! 
Well, I really really liked how you set up everything. Even though it was 
9 parts, it went very quickly. Just a few questions:

Wouldn't the police capture the murders?

Wouldn't Ranma turn into a girl in the rain or are you saying that death 
cures the Jusenkyo curses?

What did the crow say to Akane and Ranma that let him stay?

Wouldn't everyone think it's really strange that Ranma is back from the dead?

I didn't mind the guns. What you said about retribution was pretty right 
and it did come from the movie. Well, other than a few mistakes of making 
a, an into and, there weren't any other grammar problems that I saw. 
Great story! Makes me want to finish up my story quicker! ^_^ Well, I 
guess I'll rate this a *****1/2 out of 5. Yes, that's 5.5 stars.

                            
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