Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] Ranma 1/2: Ai no Kodomo 2/? (draft)
From: Harold Ancell
Date: 8/30/1996, 8:31 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

   Date: Thu, 29 Aug 1996 17:19:15 -1000 (HST)
   From: mousse@pixi.com (Mousse Lee)

   [ original premise of the "forbidden passion fruit" ]

I agree there's no need to directly delve into the past, the results
are going to be lots of fun.

   >Although I would have prefered a heartfelt "Father?" from Spice, to
   >Mousse's flippant "Congrats, it's a girl!"

	   That would indicate Spice both knows her parental situation and
   would recognize Ranma upon seeing him.  She's basicly just coming home at
   an oppertune moment.  As for Mousse, it's a bit of sarcasm.  Sounds better
   than just "You have a daughter"

Point taken, but it still left a bad taste in my mouth.

Come to think of it, the two are not mututally exclusive; Mousse's
remark could be followed by a "Father?" from Spice....

					- Harold