Whee! Nightelf's back! Let depression reign! ;)
Sunrise was one of my favorite darker fics; but it did leave a lot of
questions unanswered. Nabiki's metamorphsis, for one. Covering the
in-between years was a great idea, done well.
Beautiiful writing....characters were portrayed with skill for the most
part. I thought that Ranma's reaction to the death of most of his close
friends was a little muted, but aside from that...
The journal made a nice way to open the part. Keep using it for the
next bits.
More! More! :)
- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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/ () \ l Journalist, Author, Traveler, Historian, Java Fiend.
/ \ l Trier - LA - LV - Kiev - Reno - Hong Kong. Fnord.
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