Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][beta] Burned and Broken (Sunrise Chronicles pt.1)
From: "Mike W. Loader" <mloader@scs.unr.edu>
Date: 8/30/1996, 6:58 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Whee! Nightelf's back! Let depression reign! ;)
   Sunrise was one of my favorite darker fics; but it did leave a lot of
questions unanswered. Nabiki's metamorphsis, for one. Covering the
in-between years was a great idea, done well.
   Beautiiful writing....characters were portrayed with skill for the most
part. I thought that Ranma's reaction to the death of most of his close
friends was a little muted, but aside from that...
   The journal made a nice way to open the part. Keep using it for the
next bits.
   More! More! :)

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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