>2. Anybody want a flashback yet?  Maybe a dream sequence in part 3 or 4...

  yes! about shampoo + ranma...

        In my mind I know all the events that lead up to this fanfic, but
I'm trying to find a way to relay that without getting too dramatic.  Not
to mention the kids are starting to grow on me...

Agreed!  Ranma's got some "forbidden passion fruit" :-)

        That was the original premise for the story, from there I figured
it would be more interesting to hear about the results.  Otherwise I'd
probably be writing a very serious lemon.  I'm reluctant to go into the
first timeline yet since it would either end up very serious and/or very
lemon.

Although I would have prefered a heartfelt "Father?" from Spice, to
Mousse's flippant "Congrats, it's a girl!"

                                       - Harold

        That would indicate Spice both knows her parental situation and
would recognize Ranma upon seeing him.  She's basicly just coming home at
an oppertune moment.  As for Mousse, it's a bit of sarcasm.  Sounds better
than just "You have a daughter"

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