Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] Ranma 1/2: Ai no Kodomo 2/? (draft)
From: Harold Ancell
Date: 8/29/1996, 8:35 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

   Date: Thu, 29 Aug 1996 19:35:23 -0400
   From: PhoneyNT <we436@freenet.victoria.bc.ca>
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   >        .\\uahahahahaha... I have not yet begun to twist!
   >1. Chapter three may become part of chapter two.

   cool.

   >2. Anybody want a flashback yet?  Maybe a dream sequence in part 3 or 4...

   yes! about shampoo + ranma...

   >8. I know there must be something wrong with this chapter, C&C would be nice.

   this is really cool so far.

Agreed!  Ranma's got some "forbidden passion fruit" :-)

Although I would have prefered a heartfelt "Father?" from Spice, to
Mousse's flippant "Congrats, it's a girl!"

					- Harold