More C&C on Puck #2 ... but first a joke:
Why was Abraham Lincoln such a good mathematician?
Because he built a cabin out of natural logs.
1st posted: Wed, 21 Aug 1996 12:34:57 -0400 (EDT)
addenum posted: Mon, 26 Aug 1996 21:56:36 -0400 (EDT)
File Two - Puck.
SECTION ONE - Sticks and Stones
The man passed by the powerfully built guard who checked ID's
and... other abilities. He didn't see the point, but he supposed
that given the name of the new club it was almost a requirement.
They'd still let you in if you hadn't been affected at New Years,
but those people were either brave, curious, or stupid.
* It's up to you whether you want to use contractions, but I personally
* would avoid them whenever possible. Check out your fav novel and
* see how the author uses contractions.
The man wore shades despite the low light level. His hair was
black and short with a slight sheen to it. The face was lean, as
was his frame. His striped shirt and blue jeans weren't out of
place here. He glanced at the dance floor and shook his head,
amused. Not a few seconds were dancing in mid-air.
Or is that Avatars? he thought, resigned at the new labels
that had arose after a third's takeover of the airwaves around a
month ago on April the sixteenth. Instead of firsts, seconds,
* long sentence warning! It seems kinda contridictory to say "around"
* and give a specific date. Try: around a month ago.
thirds, and the extremely rare fourths; he had dubbed them Slights,
Avatars, Demi-gods, and Gods.
Then died from overextending his power.
* I'm still a bit curious on this one ... was his power the ability to
* manipulate EM in the radio spectrum; i.e. act as a radio/tv/etc
* transmitter? If so, you do realize that it is nearly impossible
* for a _single_ transmitter to broadcast to all over N. America, due
* the power output required (maybe that's why he died), but also
* due to the fact that the earth's curvature prevents radio from
* going through. If I remember correctly, radio frequencies are
* not bounced back by the ionosphere, but I could be wrong ...
It was probably that fatal mistake that made the names stick,
but the man doubted it.
Eventually, he came to the bar and picked a stool to sit on.
The bartender saw, walked opposite to him, and smiled. She was a
nice-looking, brown haired young woman who happened to be a second,
sorry, Avatar, he thought.
"Can I get you a drink?" she asked him cheerfully.
"Sure," the man said with a smile. "Pardon me if I'm slow but
* I'm slow, but
I'm just getting used to the name of this place." He shook his head
with a grin. "Puck's Palace?" he said with some disbelief.
She laughed. "It is kinda silly, isn't it?"
"Too bad the owner never asked Puck about it," he replied.
"How would you know?" She frowned curiously at me.
The man smiled and threw off the illusion he had around
himself. The young bartender gaped at his true appearance; long
blonde hair, intense blue eyes, pointy ears, a handsome and
slightly beautiful face, and clothes belonging to a character from
a fantasy novel. Erik Clay, also known as Puck, grinned
* you could try: Erik Clay, better known as Puck,
mischievously at the wide-eyed woman's shock.
"Oh, just a guess," he chuckled.
* Heh
ERIK(1st person)...
I sighed mentally as I sipped the rum and Coke I had paid for.
* "I had paid for" -> is this necessary?
Keeping low had been great but the opening of this place had been
* been great,
too tempting to resist.
He'd been doing so because of Valerie Decelles' destruction of
a good section of city in Edmonton. Her trial had been surprisingly
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* wordy. Try: a good section of Edmonton.
swift, as it had started a week after the incident, and the verdict
a week after that. As I had thought, the court ruled not guilty
because of temporary insanity, but Val had insisted on doing
community work, and got it. The news vultures had swarmed her after
but she faced up to them well, better than I would've. I saw her
* her after, but she
picture in the paper and saw that she still regretted her actions,
but not even the author of the corresponding article really blamed
* Kinda hard to see all that in a low-grade picture
* long sentence warning!
* Try: I saw her picture in the paper; I could tell quite clearly that
* she still lamented her actions. However, the author of the
* corresponding article disagreed; he did not really blame her as
* it was not her desire that all this should happen to her.
her. After her story came out, most people didn't blame her much as
it wasn't her fault she had been changed so.
Her problems brought me to remember the other, more recent and
personal, problem which had prompted my coming to the club. I shook
* and personal problem
my head as I remembered the conversation of a few days ago.
"WHAT did you say??" I had said, dumbfounded, as Jason looked
at me with a slightly panicked expression on his face.
"Cathy's pregnant," he repeated nervously.
"How..." I was quite surprised, as a third the red-haired
* as a third, the
Cathy was far stronger than Jason and to manage this without
* than Jason; to manage
getting injured must've been a feat. "Never mind, I'm not sure I
want to know," I sighed, then looked at him wryly. "You didn't have
to prove that a third COULD get pregnant, you know. You're sure?"
"Yes," he confirmed, sinking onto one of the basement chairs.
* How is he sure? Did Cathy use one of those white->blue if pregnant
* test kits?
"You do realize that no doctor would want to do an abortion as
she's a third and operating on one would be near impossible at best
right now."
"Abortion?" Jason blinked. "God, no! Cathy was shocked but
decided to keep the baby, even without the difficulties of trying
that. And... I really do love her, Erik."
"You damn well better," I retorted with a growl. "You're
eighteen and she's sixteen for all her power. Christ," I swore,
running a hand through my hair. "I suppose her parents know?" Jason
nodded miserably.
"As of last night," Jason confirmed. "So do mine."
* I wonder how their parents took the news
"When will the wedding be?" I asked with a sigh.
Jason threw his hands up. "I don't know! I'm just so CONFUSED
over this, Erik! It's like I'm dreaming it all."
"Well, you'd better wake up, buddy. From everything I hear,
raising a baby is not easy." I walked over and clapped a hand on
his shoulder. "I'll help if you need it, despite the stupidity of
the whole thing. The both of you have lousy timing, Jason."
My friend looked up at me, some of the strain leaving him.
"Thanks, Erik. This is came as a shock to both of us."
"Hey, you stuck with me when I changed, I'll help you with
this. It's what friends are for."
It hadn't taken long for the newshounds to find out about
Cathy and Jason. Today we had been swarmed with people wielding
* How'd it leak out? Jennifer et al?
mikes, cameras, and video equipment. The shy Cathy hid behind a
somewhat pale Jason and when they wouldn't leave, I got angry. It
was damned lucky I figured out how to affect equipment with my
illusions or else I would've been found out. These reporters had to
go though.
* This leads me to one point I've been pondering: Puck's illusions
* only affect the mind directly and not the light. This effect seems
* stranger than affecting the light directly. Is this a necessary
* limitation to begin with? ... i.e. you would have to fool yourself
* as well, otherwise you won't see what illusion you're making.
"LEAVE, for crying out loud!" I shouted at the mob. "If you
don't, we'll file harassment suits on you."
"Come on, kid, this is our job," one I didn't recognize said,
and I didn't like the tone he used at all.
"Cathy," I called out loudly so everyone could hear me, not
taking my eyes off the reporter and his camera man behind him, "you
told me about that rough encounter you and Puck had with those
other two thirds. Do you think your horns could break glass at a
distance?" I cocked my head at the suddenly nervous cameramen.
"High frequencies CAN break glass, can't they?"
At my words, Cathy came around and stood by Jason, looking
rather angry as she had a right to be. The horned red-head must've
been practicing for her horns began to hum ominously, and the pitch
was rising quickly.
"You wouldn't dare," the man said, but uncertainly.
* what about: the man said with hesitation.
* what about: the man said hesitantly.
"I think that people who stick their noses into private
matters, without the invitation of those involved, are on shaky
ground. And if you keep this up perhaps Puck will come too, and I
doubt he'd like what your doing even less than we do." I stared at
the frowning man, and said flatly, "Leave. Request an interview,
sure, but don't do this crap. I... Whoa!" I cried as I blinked at
a camera that had become mud and was now oozing down an astonished
cameraman's shoulder, the reporter's man. My doing, but they
couldn't know that.
* Always the trickster :)
The reporter had turned pale and fled.
* I thought the phrase when ... turned tail and fled ... or was
* it a pun on that phrase? :)
The rest left too, but Cathy and Jason still got a million
* try: The rest followed suit, but
calls at home. I came to this club to take my mind off things. I
was getting stares from a lot of people but I was wrapped up in my
* people, but
own thoughts. At least until someone sat by my seat and tapped my
* "own" seems redundant, but you might want to keep it for emphasis
shoulder, startling me.
"Penny for your thoughts, Puck?"
* I think it'll be cool (literally), if she sent a breeze at him to
* catch his attention.
I looked and saw who had sat beside me. She was beautiful,
willowy thin with long chestnut hair, wearing a tight black outfit
that showed off her model-thin body. I raised an eyebrow for this
was one of Winnipeg's female thirds, Wendy Morgan. She was to air
as Valerie was to fire but to a lesser degree. This woman could
* to fire, but to
leave you breathless, literally. She had been a thirty year old,
overweight secretary before the change and was one of the ones who
apparently loved the results. Last I heard, she was getting offers
* Last I have heard
from a local modelling firm.
"I was thinking about that girl, Cathy, who got pregnant," I
replied honestly. Wendy nodded knowingly as she sipped her own
drink.
"I heard, but in a way I'm glad," she said and went on at my
questioning look. "It means we're still human and can have kids if
we want."
"Thirds can at least," I pointed out. "I'm not sure about
myself. Who knows what my body had to do to adapt to another power
increase? I wasn't disoriented on the first two but the third time
* two, but
was unsettling." Morgan leaned forward, interested.
* was unsettling."
* Morgan leaned ...
* You may wish to start a new paragraph like above
"How so?" she asked.
"Well, my senses were... off kilter somehow. Keener. It took
some time to adjust. As for my powers... You can sense wind
currents and air, can't you?" She nodded. "And Valerie can do the
same with fire but she's much more sensitive. But I can feel the
energy of things around me; you, the chair, those people dancing on
and off the floor. Everything. I can't feel air the way you do, but
I can feel your power when you use it as I can my own." She looked
impressed.
"That's quite the sense. So you know who is changed?"
"Unless they can hide it, yes." I hesitated, but went on. "I
* Did he do any tests to test this? It's kinda hard to just *hide*
* powers ... I guess they can act normal, but I still imagine that
* just the latent power would be detectable. Do you mean that Puck
* can't detect them if the _don't_ use their powers?
also feel some other things but I haven't a clue what they are.
It's like... they are there, yet not." I rubbed my chin as a sudden
thought occurred to me. "Perhaps they are dimensions. I've heard of
other people teleporting; maybe that's what they're using. I've
been too busy expanding what I already know to test those, and
doesn't this sound weird to you?" I asked her, breaking off my
* too abrupt ... try: to test those theories," Puck paused for a moment,
* furrowing his eyebrows, "Doesn't this sound
voiced contemplation. She laughed.
"It was interesting," she said with a crooked smile. "Would
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* unusual response. I would have expected: "Not at all, all things
* considered, especially for you."
you like to join our little group?" My curiously raised eyebrow
asked my question for me so she elaborated. "I came to meet the
other two female adult thirds of Winnipeg tonight and this place
seemed appropriate. We spotted you when you revealed yourself so I
decided to come over and invite you."
I stood and gracefully bowed, my getup and looks making it an
appropriate gesture. "I would be honoured, Lady."
She smiled and guided me over to one of the tables in another
part of the club. There we found Wendy Morgan's fellow female
thirds.
* I thought he was in the Slight/Avatar/Demi/God mindset
One was Rebecca Ford, sixty-seven year old retiree. She used
to have grey hair which had now returned to the vibrant black of
her twenties. Listless after her husband died, the change had given
her a second youth. But not just her hair had turned black, so had
the rest of her. Black skin, black nails, black eyes, etc.
Everything about her was now a slightly different ebony hue, save
her teeth which gleamed white when she smiled at us. Her power was
naturally over shadows and could apparently make herself immaterial
at will. Just as naturally, her nickname had become Shadow.
Yvette Ranchard was the other; a thirty-two year old French
immigrant working in Winnipeg as an interior decorator for the past
few years. She had got caught up in the events of the current year.
* try: caught up in the year's events.
Amazingly, her powers were opposite Mrs. Ford's for she could
generate light in remarkable ways, from lasers to light shows. Her
hair was divided into lines of the visible, and not so visible,
spectrum. The irises of her eyes swirled with color but otherwise
* Eh? Invisible hair? Didn't know puck had that great of a vision ...
everything else on the attractive woman was the same as before.
* Pity she died later, she could have been powerful with the ability
* to generate high frequency lasers ... UV/X-ray/gamma lasers
It was no surprise to me the women were all good looking, most
thirds, Demis, became so as a result of their changes.
* Ah! Puck caught himself there ...
"Ah, it appears mademoiselle Morgan caught our wandering God,"
Yvette said with a french accent, but the 'God' part made me wince.
"Looks like he doesn't appreciate that term, Yvette," Rebecca
chuckled as she noted my reaction with approval. "Good for him;
shouldn't let it go to our heads."
* ;)
"I am but a simple elf," I said suavely as Wendy and I sat
down. It and my bland expression got them laughing. "I just wish
that poor guy hadn't broadcast that message," I sighed in my normal
voice.
The ladies nodded.
DONALD STONE...
"Blast that idiot for broadcasting that so-called bulletin all
over North America!" I fumed in the large meeting room for my new
department. I sat at the head of the table as Everett had given me
full authority in his name. There were eleven other people seated
in front of me, all still getting used to working together as they
had all been in different, and sometimes opposing, agencies. "It's
too bad he died; I'd have enjoyed locking him up."
"That happened weeks ago, Stone," a brown-haired man sitting
beside him said. "What happened?"
"It's caused some new religious cult to spring up," I growled,
disgusted at the idiocy of such people. "They say that New Years
proclaimed the return of mankind's deities and that all should
worship them."
"That's not new," an asian woman, Umeko Takahashi, commented.
The short information analyst had no pupils or irises in her pure
blue orbs, but she could still see just fine, and even better than
those WITH normal sight. "China's government encountered resistance
when they tried rounding up people with powers. Apparently, a
golden dragon appeared and lunched on a few tanks, helping some
* I take it that it wasn't suffering from iron-deficiency
people escape. Some Chinese have started to worship it. It's been
dubbed the Dragon Emperor and likely one of the fourth group to
display that much power." She cocked her head and grinned. "On a
lighter note, one was revealed in my ancestral homeland Japan. He
looks exactly like Bruce Lee." That got some groans. "We've gotten
a few other reports elsewhere," she went on, "but we can go into
those later."
"The Canadian government has agreed to let us operate in
Winnipeg so we can find Puck and arrest him for them, or at least
find out who he is," the man beside Stone began. "They can't, or
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* Since it is from Stone's perspective, if Stone knows the guy,
* give him a name
won't, try it themselves as they're a little shy dealing with a
fourth after the incident in Edmonton."
"I suppose I can understand that," I sighed, not expecting
much more than that. "If anything it will help our department get
used to each other, as well as get some experience in dealing with
a fourth."
"Why Puck, anyhow?" a younger man said who was further down
the table and someone whose name I couldn't remember offhand.
"I think he's the most dangerous to leave alone," I told
everyone, conviction in my voice. "We can determine the limits of
the others but Puck seems to have the ability to create 'spells.'
* He is sure of himself, isn't he? Can they really determine the
* limits of the others, esp with the events unfolding the way they
* are
That flexibility makes him too dangerous to remain a free agent."
I tapped the folder that held all current info on the vigilante.
"And we better do it as soon as possible or else he'll have too
much time to prepare himself. Micheals," I focused my attention on
my new second-in-command, "I want you to go over all the powers of
every person in our new department and determine with Umeko the
best people to send to Winnipeg."
Micheals nodded. "I've already sent one to Winnipeg to check
the situation there."
"What's his power?"
"Speed."
WINNIPEG.... MAY 18.
The figure floating above the meeting going down between two
men on the dark street below looked on with interest. He'd caught
* Ack!
* A figure floating above looked with interest at the meeting
* going on between the two men below.
* Then again, mine isn't much better.
on to this while flying and the suspicious nature of the first
meeting had caught his interest. With an invisibility spell that
even a Demi couldn't normally see through, Erik found out a few
interesting things, and when you can fly, people can't hear your
footsteps.
Let's see now...
The guy who looked like an Anglish-Asian mix carefully tasted
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* What's Anglish?
the white powder the other guy had given him. Then nodded, and re-
sealed the plastic bag it had come in. In return, the young man
quickly handed a wad of bills to the messenger, who placed it in an
internal pocket of his coat. Very neat.
Not.
After having done what he wanted to do with the white powder,
Erik followed the man with the money. The coat-wearing man slogged
through slushy puddles as unpredictable Winnipeg weather had
* puddles since unpredictable
produced a quick melt this year. Puck wondered what the other man
would say to his fellows when the cocaine, after Erik's
intervention, turned out to be powdered sugar. As for the other
slime...
A huge sinkhole that hadn't been there before suddenly
appeared underneath the man's foot, not a difficult feat as the
* I think you meant "unusual" rather than "difficult"
roads did this somewhat naturally. The man shouted in shocked
surprise as ice cold water drenched him up to his armpits with the
frigid liquid. He struggled out quite quickly, and chattered his
* come to think of it, that's one *deep* sinkhole. Is it really that
* bad up there?
teeth when he did. His thick coat did nothing but freeze him now so
he quickly removed it and his shoes, cursing the city's work crews.
* removed it along with his shoes,
The money, he discovered as he checked on it, was soaked. So he
cursed again and placed it on a nearby pile of garbage while he
tried wringing out the water in his clothing, dumping the water
from his shoes.
* in this clothing and dumping the
Suddenly, a masked man burst out of the garbage pile,
surprising the shivering man, grabbed the dripping money, and ran
away like the devil was after him. Horrified, furious, and afraid
to lose the payment, the messenger, in socks only, ran after the
thief, who had ducked around the corner ahead.
* ... er ... no comment
He would find nobody around the corner when he reached it.
Puck levitated the undisturbed wad into a plastic bag and flew
* undisturbed? How? If the "stolen" money was an illusion and the
* real money was still in the same place, make it a bit clearer.
* how about: levitated the now-visible wad ...
away, chuckling. He had no love or sympathy for people dealing in
drugs. Too many kids got hooked by drug dealers, and while he knew
this was only a drop in the bucket, he felt it a good deed for the
day.
* it was a good
The drug dealer would think he was tricked and the messenger
could only say he was robbed. Nothing would point to the Puck.
The money Erik could dry out easily, and if it was marked he
was sure he could find out. He didn't covet it, but it might come
in handy. Perhaps a small anonymous donation to a drug
rehabilitation clinic, using only a fraction of the amount he had
for the full amount would be too suspicious. He'd have to wait in
any case.
* why would it be suspicious? Was it that much?
Unfortunately, Erik missed an observer to his little prank. If
he had been expecting trouble he would have looked around and
* trouble, he would
discovered a person with the power level of an Avatar watching the
exchange and subsequent 'theft.'
* Puck should have casted a general detection spell
That was slick, the Winnipeg dispatched agent whose code name
was Runner thought. He gotten a vague clue from a one of the thirds
* He had gotten a vague clue from one of
in his newly created department on where to observe the Puck's
activities. He'd observed the exchange from behind the same corner
Puck had sent the illusion of the 'thief' around. Runner could move
faster than the human eye could see for short periods of time and
had moved to the opposite corner before the messenger saw him. The
agent had witnessed the illusion vanish. The agent had seen enough
and left before the Puck could discover him.
The next day he heard from the police department that the
powder had actually been sugar and that the drug dealers called it
* I'm kinda curious how the police could have found that out so quickly
a double cross on the part of the messenger, who had skipped town
with no money to appease his own bosses.
In the apartment he was waiting in, Runner reported the event
to his immediate superior, Umeko.
"He wasn't visible, but the illusion and method would fit his
profile. The buyer was convinced what he was buying was real so
Puck must've transformed it then stole the money from the
* transformed it, then
messenger. In essence: He screwed both parties and they don't
* In essence, he screwed
* I don't think that this is the proper use of a colon
* One use of a colon is to remove water from digested food (*duck*)
suspect him at all. And the guy he took the money from skipped town
so they won't have a clue." He chuckled. "Even if they knew about
it, AND knew who really did it, what could they do anyway?"
"That's the reason we're going after him," Umeko replied
seriously over the phone. "Besides, it's hard to prove it WAS him
at all. I only got a vague impression that he would be in that area
at that time, and that's the best luck I've had. There's something
about fourths that make them near impossible to focus on."
"So you don't have any more leads?"
"No. Just check out anything that might get you more
information."
"You mean like Puck's Palace?" Runner asked, and got
disbelieving silence in reply. "It's a new club that opened up, but
wasn't related to our man until he showed up there a few times in
the last week."
"'Puck's Palace.' Why me?" Umeko groaned.
"Perhaps the gods smiled on you."
"That's. Not. Funny. Runner."
He sighed. "It was just a joke. Can't you say Roger, Ume-
chan?"
"Not on company time," she said frostily. *click!*
"That could've gone better," agent Runner said ruefully,
looking at the humming receiver.
STONE...
I looked up, surprised, to see Umeko on the other side of the
room slam down her phone. Hanging around the current set of large
rooms that was the core of our growing information network kept me
informed. From what I'd seen of Umeko she was an unusually cheerful
* Umeko, she
and alert person, seeing her even slightly angry was a revelation.
* alert person; seeing her
I walked over to my fellow third with raised eyebrows.
"Problem?" I asked, and she immediately composed herself with
remarkable haste.
"No, sir. Agent Runner was just reporting in," she said calmly
and then proceeded to relay to me the report she had been given.
I momentarily forgot her remarkable behaviour as I frowned
angrily over what I had just heard. "Blast it! Interfering with the
local drug trade will make things harder to move covertly now, even
if they don't know the real reason for the trouble." This Puck
character was starting trouble sooner than I had predicted, and I
was more determined than ever to bring him down before he became a
full-bore threat.
* it seems that Stone has a bone to pick ... if anything, Puck would
* be a danger to drug traffickers, not to law-abiding citizens.
Micheals had finished his report and Stone was pleased with
the amount of people his second-in-command thought could handle
this fourth if they banded together. Of the 9 thirds, 97 seconds
and 329 firsts they had rounded up so far from every agency and
government position, 5 thirds and 42 seconds would have a use in
the Winnipeg operation, including Stone. There was also the
possibility of recruiting two more thirds who were part of the
local police force in Winnipeg.
Micheals had also gotten those selected started on a quick,
crash course training exercise. They were beginning to learn to
work as a team, complementing and protecting each other; Stone had
gone in as often as possible to help those who didn't have combat
or field experience. It helped that all were relatively
inexperienced with their powers and were mostly on even footing.
Remembering the extermely tough time quite a few of the seconds had
with him only made him realize that Puck would be in an equivalent
position to Stone. Fortunately, Puck hadn't displayed any martial
or combat skills as yet so they had the advantage there.
* as of yet, so they
It also comforted him that his cold and ice didn't bother some
seconds as their powers let them combat him with better results.
That meant his thirds had a very good chance.
Then I remembered Umeko's anger and looked at her levelly.
"That doesn't explain the look you had." She flushed and her
totally blue eyes looked away, embarrassed.
"Agent Runner had a relationship with me a while back, sir,"
she confessed and I nodded. "I still like him but he's also the
only one who seems to be able to make me mad."
"As long as it doesn't effect your work, I don't care," I said
dismissively. "And call me Stone, not sir. Save that for Everett."
She nodded slowly, and then looked at me with arch amusement.
"You know that won't help your growing nickname."
"Nickname?"
"Stone Cold."
I considered that information, then shrugged. "I've been
called worse, and it's fitting." She snorted before turning back to
her computer.
"Just make sure no one adds 'Dead' to that 'fitting' title...
Stone."
I gave her back a chilly smile before leaving for another
training run.
I met with Everett the next morning and told him of my plans
to begin in Winnipeg within the next week. He nodded and leaned
forwards, pressing his fingers together.
"You won't have much time for this, Stone," he informed me,
and went on to explain why. "In the meetings I've had with the
other agencies there have been a few proposals on what roles we
should play and how our fledgling agency should grow. One is for
the pursuit and containment of criminals with powers. I've stressed
the need for as little bureaucracy as possible for that, even a
small delay could be fatal." I nodded approvingly. "The second is
terrorism; some groups may already have people with exploitable
capabilities and are planning to use them. That is why you may have
little time."
"I hadn't thought of that," I said, frowning at the notion.
"You've been busy. Another problem is the already existing
crime network. A few have gained useful talents, but I've heard at
least one third is operating in the mafia."
I scowled at that; yet more problems.
"As a result, our department is going to have both free reign
and a tight leash, though the leash is rather thin at the moment."
He leaned back in his chair. "We can't learn how to fight the new
opportunities of corruption these powers will bring unless we try
our wings freely. Granted some agencies tried to pull strings so
they would have an advantage, but the president put his foot down
on that. I agree with him; we CAN'T play favourites. I've contacted
other governments via the United Nations and the idea of making of
an international organization like the one we have begun here is
being hashed around.
"The benefits of that are obvious; more agents with power
under one group means greater flexibility for disasters and less
hassle. We will of necessity be flexible for the diversity of
powers will make us so. Anything from fixing damage from natural to
human disasters, or even preventing them from even occurring, will
be our goal. We will be both covert and very public."
I took a moment to digest all this, then said, "That's quite
a job for a new department, almost impossible."
"But one only we can handle," Everett pointed out. "Our people
can do much more than ordinary agents, and with skill and training
we WILL be ready." He tapped a finger on his desk absently. "Also,
if there are any people NASA could use that you will not be taking
with you, send them to Cape Kennedy. Some civilians with powers are
gathering there at NASA's request."
"Why?"
"So that our group will become familiar with people not
willing to become a part of a government agency, and besides," he
said with a grin, "like a lot of people I wouldn't mind seeing
Americans on the moon." I raised my eyebrows in surprise; Everett
didn't seem like the dreamer type. Perhaps the changes that had
occurred to some people recently had made him think about childhood
memories. "They've already made some progress in improving
structural materials and engineering designs. If our department
helps we would have a positive foothold there too."
At last he finished with, "So now you know the plans I have.
You have two, maybe three weeks at best for your operation before
I have to pull you back to work on expanding everything here."
I hid my scowl; I had hoped for more time than that. But then,
superiors never do give you the time you need when you have an
important project. Instead, I merely nodded and left the room,
leaving Everett to handle the petty bureaucrats while I refined our
new environment as much as I could before flying the needed
personnel to my target's area of operation.
Soon, Puck, I thought grimly, very soon.
WINNIPEG.... MAY 21...
From his room, Erik heard the door close harder than usual and
his mother's surprised greeting. Then his father raised his voice.
"Erik! Come down to the kitchen," he said, and it was an
order, not his usual polite request.
Uh oh, Erik thought with a sinking feeling as he left his
room, I think I DID go a little too far this time. When he entered
the kitchen, his dad pointed to the remaining chair as his mother
watched silently, wondering what her husband was so angry about.
"Just WHAT did you think you were doing?" Donald Clay demanded
of his sheepish-looking son. "Do you KNOW how stupid it was?!"
"What did he do, Don?" Amanda Clay asked him as Erik ducked
his head.
"I just found out that last night in one of the downtown
police stations SOMEONE," he focused a steely eye on Erik,
"happened to dump a garbage bag full of cocaine sacks in one of the
offices." Amanda inhaled sharply and turned her head to glare at
her son in mixed anger and fear, Erik bowed his head more. "Just
WHERE did you get all that from, Erik?" he said in a dangerously
low tone.
"Ah... Hahaha... I... er... sort of collected it from around
the city," Erik replied weakly.
"'Collected'?" his father rumbled ominously. Erik sighed and
gave up trying to stall.
"I overheard that some new shipments had arrived in Winnipeg.
I had already devised a spell to locate similar objects, like to
like, so I used it. I disguised myself as a kid and a pusher gladly
gave me what I needed to screw himself up." Amanda or his father
couldn't disapprove of the slight anger that crept into Erik's
voice when he told them that. "It wasn't just cocaine I got, but it
was mostly that I collected. Invisible, I flew around town, now
knowing where the major stashes were and used some minor flim-flam
tricks to switch packets."
"With sugar again?" his father sighed, rubbing his forehead
tiredly.
"Not... quite." Erik paused. "Marshmallows."
"Marshmallows?!" Amanda declared incredulously. "Erik, what on
earth for?!"
"White powder, white puffs of sugar; they're two types of
sweets, what's the diff?" he replied blandly, lips twitching
despite his current situation.
Quite a bit apparently, as his father lectured him for the
next half hour.
"...and to make things worse," he concluded, "the gangs and
drug dealers are going to have some big suspicions that it was you.
Hell, the police already do! For God's sake, Erik, do you realize
how much cocaine you took??"
"Several million dollars worth I imagine, but I doubt they'll
be laying a lawsuit on me," Erik replied.
"If it were possible, they'd be laying you under the ground,"
his father replied grimly.
MAY 22...
"You really need to get your head examined," Jason said
disgustedly as they ate lunch in school with Cathy and Rob, who was
looking around nervously. The newspapers had shown the story of the
cocaine and marshmallows this morning and it didn't take long for
them to realize who had done it.
Cathy looked at Erik worriedly but it couldn't hide the glow
she had about her that all pregnant women who want their baby seem
to have. They'd tried ultrasound on her to see if it was possible
later to determine if it would be a boy or girl, but the soundwaves
just couldn't penetrate Cathy. Probably because of the sound-
oriented nature of her powers. Eventually, they had decided it
could wait until she gave birth and find out the hard way. Erik
ignored Jason and focused on Cathy's aura. Surprisingly, he found
what he wanted.
"Boy," Erik announced.
"What?" Jason said confusedly, not understanding at first
because he had been thinking about what his friend had done.
"Boy," the blonde-haired teenager repeated, nodding casually
at a wide-eyed Cathy, whose hand had flown to rest on her abdomen.
"That's what I sense from her aura."
Cathy gave Jason such a happy smile that it tore away all of
his frustration at Erik's dangerous prank and the couple held hands
tenderly as they looked in each other's eyes. Erik felt a momentary
pang at the sight of their obvious love but irritably shook off the
feeling.
He just wished everyone would understand it wasn't in his
nature to stand by and do nothing, especially where he lived! The
corruption had it coming to his way of thinking. Oh, he knew he
wasn't some saintly super-hero person, but those who hooked kids on
drugs really ticked him off.
It had also been disturbingly easy, even for himself.
Everything he needed to do had seemed so clear to Erik, like his
mind was becoming more efficient. His brain had to have adapted to
his final boost, his normally excellent memory was now perfect and
problems on his tests simpler to solve.
* He still attended class? Ack, I feel sorry for the other students.
And people had no idea how much more power he was getting from
the supposed ninety-day period after March the sixteenth. It was
proportional to the other increments, just longer. The first three
periods increased a person's powers randomly, from a half of what
they had at their boost, to three times that amount. This stretch
was coming close to an end as it was May twenty-eighth, but Erik
was about twice as powerful now as he was when the third boost
first hit, and even then he had been formidable. He was actually
scared to try anything major so he had been using as little as
possible.
It wasn't a wise thing to not attempt something at all,
however, thus he wasn't wearing an illusion to school anymore;
transformation spells were coming easier to him. He actually looked
like his old self again, but if he didn't reenforce the admittedly
weak spell with another every so often it would fall apart and he
* so often, it would
would revert back: his powers didn't like him looking other than
his elven self. Perhaps with more normal people the spell would be
permanent but he didn't want to experiment on other people. Things
were calm around Winnipeg so he didn't have anything to test his
powers on.
Why did he feel so apprehensive though?
STONE...
MAY 24...TWO DAYS LATER...
[snipped]
ERIK... MAY 27...
[snipped]
STONE... MAY 31...
I frowned at the papers in front of me without seeing them. I
had just finished a lengthy discussion with Everett and didn't like
what he had told me.
My time was shorter than I had thought. My superior had told
me I had to return, with or without Puck, on the fourth of June.
Everett had started getting pressure to return all the agents I had
brought with me back and start them onto separate duties related to
their powers.
I grimaced. My hopes to find Puck's real identity had been
slim as too much probing would likely attract unwanted attention.
His power of illusion and reasonably high amount of cunning made it
even harder.
Therefore, I had to take the bastard down by force before my
time was up.
Local recruitment had been fruitful; there were more seconds
and thirds for the percentage of people north of the devastated
town of Hardpoint than anywhere else in the world. In addition to
the 5 thirds and 42 seconds that were DOC personnel, 3 thirds and
30 seconds had been recruited to capture Puck. Oscar was one of
those thirds, his buddy Chain was recovering in the hospital but
his arm wasn't coming back miraculously even if his body had healed
over the wound swiftly. I told him I'd send a messenger to the
fourth, Betty Forestt, for help regenerating the arm. For if she as
a fourth-level healer couldn't, no one probably could.
The other two thirds and the seconds I was less sure about.
Yvette Ranchard had met with Puck several times in that club named
after him, but she seemed willing to cooperate and had even offered
advice on taking advantage of Puck's so-called gallantry. I had to
admit it felt in character for my adversary, and even if I was
unsure about her Ranchard's light powers would come in handy.
The third Demi-God, THIRD I rebuked myself mentally, was
* THIRD,
Edmond Yellow, a twenty-one year old university student who had
jumped at the chance to participate. He loved his powers and styled
himself a master of telekinesis. The thin, brown-haired, young man
with constantly shifting, wavy hair was eager to prove how useful
his powers would be. That eagerness was like an annoying itch but
I could tolerate it for the boy WAS good with his power.
The seconds were of the younger generation in Winnipeg. Some
were thrill-seekers, others wanted to bring down the more famous
Puck and become famous themselves. They weren't worried as the Puck
had always seemed to avoid the use of lethal force. I reserved
judgement on that but it felt right.
Even now, groups were hurriedly training together for the
second of June. I loathed a rushed job but I had no choice; if I
ever tried again the Puck would be too experienced to handle. I
wasn't concerned about what to do with him after we caught him, I
believed the mere FACT that a fourth COULD be captured would be the
most important success of the mission. Maybe others could convince
him to join the agency, or maybe something else, I didn't care.
All I wanted to do now was to take the son of a bitch down.
And down HARD.
ERIK... JUNE 1...
"You sure about all this, Erik?" Rob said nervously to his
blonde friend. Jason and Cathy were with them as well but they
looked more confident than their skittish friend. "I know she's
mellowed but..."
"Well, who better to do deals face-to-face?" Erik replied
patiently. "Look. We'll be starting sometime after university
begins. You can handle whatever computer stuff we need done, Jason
the advertising work, Cathy can work in the office and handle phone
calls with that truly pleasant voice of hers since she'll be less
than mobile soon," I added, making the red-head blush. "Myself,
well, that's obvious. We can all double for everybody else so as
not to skip university classes. But I REALLY," I stressed, "don't
want to get gipped. From what I've heard business can be vicious
sometimes so I want to be sure we know clients are telling the
truth. And so..." Erik stopped when he spotted the new arrival to
the cafeteria and waved her to come join the quartet. The raven-
haired girl came over, curious. "What's up, Erik?" she said.
"Ah, Jennifer," Erik said with a charming smile, "I'm so glad
you asked me that question. Have a seat and let's talk."
"All right, I'll do it," Jennifer agreed after they had
explained and she thought about it, "but I have one request." Erik
raised his eyebrows.
"And that is...?"
"Ask the Puck if he can discover how to extend the length I
can stay in my second form," she said, looking at Erik directly.
Needless to say, he was surprised. Not at talking like he wasn't
the Puck, they were at school after all, but at the odd request.
"Why??" Rob blurted, voicing aloud everyone's bafflement.
Jennifer leaned forward, eyes nervously looking from side-to-
side. "Did you hear scientists believe people don't age when they
are in their second body? It's like your body returns to the exact
same state it was in when you change back, even after ten hours. So
if you can lengthen that time..."
"...you live longer," Erik finished, comprehension dawning. He
considered her hopeful face and sighed. "Sounds risky, but I can
ask him. Don't expect miracles though," he warned. Jennifer stood
up, smiling saucily at him.
"It's that a God's specialty?" she said, and walked away,
ignoring Erik's sour look and the other three's mirthful
expressions.
Later that day, Erik went to Puck's Palace to make sure
everything was all right and found a surprise waiting for him.
Instead of just scoping him out, another of Stone's agents walked
right up to him, and said, "Tomorrow at 6 p.m. There are several
empty fields six miles north of the city limits. Stone will be
waiting for you there."
He left the club after giving the young man slightly more
detailed information. It didn't ease Erik's mind. I shouldn't go,
he thought, but what would that idiot Stone do if I don't? Frowning
angrily, he left as well, no longer in the mood to stay.
Why did this asshole have to pick me to be his chew toy? Erik
growled to myself as he flew away, invisible. And if I get HIM off
my case, will there just be another? What should I do? Erik debated
with himself this dilemma all the way home.
He didn't come up with an answer.
STONE... JUNE 2...
I watched the skies as I stood amidst weeds and dried-out
dirt. It was almost time and everyone was ready.
Against my better judgement, all the people I had gathered
were standing in a loose semi-circle. Mostly because attacking the
Puck one-by-one would be tactical suicide with the power of
illusion he had, especially as I had no idea how practiced he was
at it. Our powers as a group stood the best chance, but the
destruction such a conflict would result in was why we stood out
here in the middle of nowhere.
Yellow, who was looking at the sky almost as intently, jerked
suddenly. "He's HERE!!" he cried, the crowd of people shifted, some
with excitement, some with unease..
I didn't see anything, but then, neither did I have a sense of
solid objects which the Puck hadn't known or thought about. "Bring
him down where we want him," I ordered. "And take down that
illusion, Fletcher!"
"Sure, boss," was the amused sneer I got as a reply. I ignored
the tone and watched what happened next.
Yellow was concentrating, and sweat popped out on his forehead
when his fish started fighting back. Nobody saw the results until
Fletcher unleashed what I could only call a ripple towards the area
his target should be.
And there the Puck was.
The elf seemed surprised at his illusion's disappearance but
not at Yellow forcing his landing fifteen feet away and
approximately where everyone could get a good shot at the bastard.
There was a murmur from those who had never seen him before; he was
a sight, I'll reluctantly give him that.
Puck whistled, obviously impressed as he surveyed the mass of
people facing him. "This the Power Hour or something?" he remarked
bemusedly, scratching the back of his head. His gaze locked on one
person in particular and he frowned. "I THOUGHT that felt familiar.
Who let YOU out, wax face?"
Fletcher, the third with the face twisted disturbingly who had
fought Puck at the bank robbery, grinned venomously. "I got cut a
deal, ELF, and helping bring in your sorry ass cuts my time. Didn't
have to twist MY arm much."
"Why bother?" Puck responded dryly. "Who's the lady?" He
referred to the woman who was keeping a neutral expression as she
held one of Fletcher's hands.
"I am an agent of the DOC, codename Amp," she replied coolly.
I knew her full profile; Ellen Rosenholt, age thirty-six and former
FBI investigator for criminal fraud. I couldn't remember what she
used to look like, but her appearance was remarkable under her
casual clothes, worn for free moment. At five foot seven, she was
a woman one could certainly call voluptuous, but her skin
coloration tended to distract one's attention from that. Semi-
straight, glowing lines of variable color constantly travelled
across her pink skin from right to left. Her shoulder-length brown
hair wasn't affected.
We had found out that she could increase other people's powers
somehow if she maintained skin contact with them, which was why she
had been reluctantly been paired with Fletcher, or rather Distort
as he called himself now. It also rendered her immune to his power
as long as she did so, but it was his leering examination of her
body she truly disliked.
Puck winced at her codename. "I guess names belonging to the
funny books are becoming popular," he sighed before turning to face
me. "All right, Stone, I came. What did you want to say? Not that
I can't guess with all the power you've collected here," he added
sourly, kicking the dirt he stood on peevishly as he crossed his
arms.
"I want you to hand yourself over to our custody," I told him
levelly, "if you don't, we will drag you in as a vigilante." Those
seconds that hadn't changed before now did so at my warning.
Puck visually looked over the force arrayed against him, then
paused. He looked down at his feet, expression speculative. "You
really think you can do that?" he mused.
Suddenly, there was a thirty-foot tall Puck glaring down at us
all. I knew it had to be an illusion but it still jolted me and
scared the hell out of others in the group from the gasps I heard.
* Wordy
* Try: I knew it had to be an illusion, but it still jolted me. The
* gasps I heard from the others said the same.
Distort wasn't impressed, however, and his bolt of chaotic energies
hit the Puck-giant in the middle and made it vanish. The real Puck
reappeared and he was smiling amusedly, damn him!
One of the seconds didn't take it well. He looked like some
kind of space ranger in his second form, ray gun and all. He jumped
up about seven feet and hung there somehow as he pulled out his
gun. "Fuck you, asshole!" he shouted and shot at the Puck with a
neon green energy beam.
Puck rolled his eyes, held up an arm, and just TOOK the beam
on the back of his hand. There was a little explosion of emerald
discharge into the air but other than that it did nothing to the
* air, but other than that, it
elf. "I'm two levels higher than you," he rebuked the stunned
attacker, "A Demi... Damn. Okay, a Demi could've taken that without
much trouble, much less a fourth level like myself. Dance,
numbskull." He placed his hand's fingers into a gun position and
zapped two minor lightning bolts at the second's feet, who howled
in pain as he dropped to the ground. The elf turned to me,
collected himself, and said, "Mind if I explain something to you
too?"
I frowned, wondering what he was up to. "And that is?"
"I noticed that you have nine thirds and the seconds to make
up for a tenth, so you likely assume ten thirds are necessary to
take me down. Am I right?"
"Possibly," I admitted, as people readied themselves to
attack. Puck sadly shook his head.
"I don't think you have the right numbers, much less the right
powers. I suspect Val could wipe the floor with you if she let
loose. Myself, I'm hindered by the fact that I need to create
'spells' to use my powers," he admitted, "and that it will take
time to forge an array to have an effective defense against
attacks. BUT," he smiled, "I DO have two specialties where my power
is most effective at the moment. One is illusion, the other," he
raised his hands and they crackled with energy; we readied
ourselves to attack just before he did, "is transformation!"
And he instantly disappeared into the ground!
"What?!?!" I demanded. He hadn't done anything! Puck appeared
to broken through a thin crust of earth and fallen into mud.
"Fire!" I yelled, but I knew that most couldn't penetrate the earth
that much.
Then from his safe place the Puck did something so devilish,
yet simple, I cursed myself. An energy wave visibly rushed through
the ground we stood on and the next thing I knew I, and most
others, were falling into three and half feet worth of sucking mud.
Most people, including myself, couldn't fly so we would be unable
to get out easily. A few could and they hovered, looking
disbelievingly over the huge patch of mud that had come into
existance below our feet. I didn't know how to use my power to get
out without freezing the muck around and imprisoning myself.
* if he were experienced with his powers, he should have created
* a frozen stairway out of the mud to walk out of the mud
I cursed a blue streak at the Puck as I waded for the 'shore.'
^^^^^^^^^^^
* never heard of that phrase before
OVER THE MUD PIT...
It was all Yvette could do to not giggle as she hovered over
* Try: It took all Yvette had to not giggle
the hilarious scene. Edmond Yellow floated nearby, using his
telekinesis to hover as he gaped. One of the male DOC agents who
could also fly was shaking his head at the mess. He was a heavily-
built person with flaming red hair called Graviner. The forces of
gravity and inertia were things he could manipulate at will, to a
degree.
"I knew this seemed too easy," he muttered. Floating over to
Ed he said, "Use your power to lift the thirds out first."
"I can't touch that wacko guy and the woman with him unless he
drops his aura," Edmond complained.
"Just get the others first then," Graviner sighed. "I'll talk
to Distort to drop it unless he likes mud."
Yvette looked down at the twisted man and her eyes widened.
"You don't need to!" she gasped. The other two turned to see what
she was talking about.
Distort had increased his disturbing aura, repelling the mud,
and was quickly walking for dry ground with a slightly muddy Amp
behind him.
"That guy is bad news," Graviner muttered.
Yvette privately agreed.
IN THE MUD PIT...
"It'd be so COOL, Janice. It'll be exciting, Janice!" a
feline-bodied young woman was muttering as she headed for the far
away dry ground, walking behind a group of like-minded people. The
blasted mud was making her fur uncomfortable. Her companion, a new
friend by the name of Tami looked glum as she waded beside the
angry cat woman.
"I'm sorry, Janice..." blonde Tami mourned, her numerous and
muddy bracelets weighed heavily on her arms.
"Just SHUT UP! I HATE this MUD!" Janice roared at her.
"Now, now. No cat fighting in the pool," someone chuckled
behind them. Furious, the werecat whirled, claws raised.
"LOOK YOU ass... hole..." Her shout trailed to stunned silence
as a muddy Puck, eyebrows raised, looked at her.
"Sorry about this," he chuckled, "but I need the odds to be
more even." Before they could shout, a wave shot out from him and
the two women, along with all the others in the wave's way, were
stuck in the rock the mud had become. A powerful laser beam from
Yvette just missed him as he ducked back under the mud, leaving
them stuck along with about thirty other yelling seconds.
"Perfect. Just perfect," Janice muttered disgustedly as she
rested her elbows on the unyielding stone, feeling she was indeed
firmly stuck.
Tami looked ready to cry.
Dum dum dum dum dum dum, Erik 'Jaws' Clay chuckled to himself
as he 'flew' in the deep muck. He didn't know how long he could
hold his breath, but he wasn't needing air yet.
The idea for the mud had come from a roleplaying game he had
played once, and it had worked beautifully. It hadn't taken much
effort for dirt to become mud or rock, there was little difference
between the three. And he was effectively removing most of the
seconds from the conflict as he trapped them in the mud pit. Erik
even got Oscar, who, while stronger than the seconds, would have a
hard time getting out with little leverage.
WHOOM!!
What the HECK was that?! Erik thought frantically as a shock
wave from a nearby explosion buffeted him.
WHOOM!!
Time to go topside, I suspect, he thought grimly.
STONE...
I watched agent Force's block-like shoulders heave as he
tossed another silvery sphere into a part of the huge mud pit that
bastard Puck hadn't turned into rock to trap most of the seconds.
Yellow was telling him where Puck was moving but the elf moved like
an eel through that muck.
WHOOM!!
Mud flew everywhere as it splattered protesting seconds. Not
that it mattered, almost all were covered with mud, including
myself to my growing irritation. Ranchard and Graviner hovered
behind us, the criminal Distort and agent Amp positioned a little
further down the rim of the muck pit, and Carla on the other side
of myself.
A mud-covered object burst out of the muck at an impressive
velocity, arced over our heads, and touched down a good seven feet
away. I clenched my hands at the jovially smiling elf who was
covered with wet soil.
"Are we having fun yet?" Puck inquired courteously, wiping off
some of the sludge on his face with a flick of a finger. Then he
dipped a bit in his posture with a look of surprise, but
straightened with a little effort and focused his attention on
Graviner.
By the strained look on my agent's face, he must be increasing
Puck's weight as much as he could, I could even see the ground
compressing under the elf's weight! But the muddy fourth still
stood, albeit with some effort. How tough WAS this bastard?? I'd
felt Graviner's power personally to see how it felt and I was
almost immediately knocked down. Then Yellow added his own power to
force Puck to the ground and now Puck started showing strain on his
face as he sank deeper.
Why isn't he doing anything? I wondered uneasily. And for an
answer, I got a blinding flash of light and a cry of pain from
Graviner. When my eyes cleared, I saw Yvette had moved to float
beside the Puck as he rose from the depression the interrupted
stunt had placed him in. I heard a moan and glanced to the side to
see the gravity-manipulating agent moaning on the ground as he
clutched a smoking shoulder.
"Thank you, Yvette," Puck thanked the glowing woman with a
smile, and I realized with a burning fury that they had tricked me.
"Is no problem, my friend," Yvette smiled back but cautiously
watching us. "This whole thing stupid. You expected me to stop
them," she accused the elf, who shrugged innocently.
"Son of a bitch!" I growled, but she only smiled sweetly at
me.
"Should not have attempted to force me to fight a friend,
monsieur. Agent Graviner not hurt bad, and we all heal quick, n'est
pas?"
"I knew that was a mistake," Carla muttered from behind me but
I didn't waste time glaring at her. I should've listened to my
initial misgivings about Ranchard, THAT was a mistake. Yellow and
Force moved up beside me while Carla checked up on Graviner.
Unfortunately, I had made a much bigger error.
BY THE MUD POOL...
Distort had watched this all from the side, having an
unobstructed view. The bitch he had holding his hand made his power
^^^^^
* If this is still Stone's POV, that is rather a strong word for him
* to use on a fellow agent
much stronger and he decided he had had enough following orders.
Now it was time to cut loose, and the power inside him began
roiling in anticipation.
Agent Amp couldn't help but notice this, linked as they were.
"What are you doing?" she demanded. Amplifying his power drained
her own and the amount he was taking away was making her nervous.
Her eyes widened in fear when his hand clamped onto hers with
insane strength and he grinned at her.
"Solving your problem," he whispered in a sinister hiss, then
turned to where Puck and Yvette stood. He howled triumphantly as he
released the power that the Puck had found so hard to counteract,
and it roared towards the defenders.
A shocked Puck had time to give a startled shout before it hit
him and Yvette, who screamed. The shield he instinctively erected
lasted a half-second before it crumbled and let the shimmering wave
of destruction take them.
Distort laughed in glee.
STONE...
"WHAT THE HELL?!?!" I shouted as my enemy vanished behind an
avalanche of Distort's wrenching energies. I whirled to see Distort
smiling horribly and Amp looking pale. The madman stopped when
Force, Carla, and a painfully moving Graviner ran over to make him
cease.
"Let her go, asshole," Carla said evenly, the two male agents
backing her up.
"Or what?" he sneered back. "Do anything and I'll blow you
away like I did them, draining her further!"
I started walking over to this slime when Yellow gasped, and
I whirled to look.
Puck was painfully getting up, as I knew Distort's energies
could hurt him badly for some reason, and it showed. His costume
was badly torn, and his seriously cut and bleeding skin was very
visible. But that wasn't the reason Yellow had gasped, and even I
had to swallow.
Yvette Ranchard hadn't been so lucky as Puck.
The instant Puck saw what was left of her body, he froze.
Standing quickly up, he numbly hurried over to see what he couldn't
believe at first. At first he stood over her, stunned, then with
robot-like movements he repaired his cape and covered her body with
it. I saw tears flowing down his cheeks and even I had to
sympathize with him, he'd obviously never lost or seen killed
someone like that before and appeared to be in shock. Distort's
insane cackle broke the grieving silence.
"Awwww... Guess the bitch wasn't lucky, huh, elf boy?" he
chortled.
Puck's face contorted with utter rage. He didn't bother fixing
that damn costume of his and ran straight for Distort at an
appalling rate of movement, teeth bared in a snarl of fury; I never
thought he could move that fast!
Distort managed only a weak counter-attack but Puck slid
smoothly out of the way of it and created a fiercely glowing sword
of light. One swing he made and Amp was freed from the madman's
grip. The hard way. Amp shrieked as she let go of the severed hand.
The disarmed criminal never had a chance to howl in pain as
Puck grabbed him by the neck and slammed the slime into the ground
so hard I felt the goddamn shockwave from where I stood.
"Lucky?? LUCKY?!?!" Puck roared furiously as Distort's panic
and pain-filled gaze looked into the elf's whitely glowing eyes as
he was held down by the elf's grip of unyielding force. "That's
something YOU. ARE. NOT!!!"
We were so stunned by the chain of events that we didn't react
when Puck leaped up and, to our horror, with his sword CUT OFF
DISTORT'S LEGS AT THE KNEES!!! Blood flowed before the Demi's
healing started clotting but the pain made Distort howl. Like a
rabid dog, he lashed out with that terrible power of his at his
tormentor and hit the elf's chest with his bolt. But Puck merely
took the pain the energy caused in him and turned it into more
anger. The sword speared down into and through Distort's stomach
and he screeched terribly as the sword burned his vitals under
Puck's equally burning glare.
Carla had had enough. "Puck! Stop it!" she yelled at the
enraged elf as I disbelievingly watched events at a greater
distance than she. "Force! Yellow! Anyone! Get him off before he
kills the bastard!"
So engrossed was Puck in his vengeance that the quick-to-react
Yellow yanked at him without initial resistance and the elf was
tossed off the moaning and badly wounded man. He landed in the
dirt, but immediately got up again and headed for Distort again,
hands crooked like claws. He almost didn't stop when Carla
interposed herself.
"STOP! You are NOT the law!" she shouted. Puck glared
balefully down at the agent.
"He. Killed. Yvette!" he grated out, and those tears began
flowing again.
"Yes! He did! And will you be any better than HIM?" she spat.
Behind her, I saw Force shaking his head at the sight of the pain
filled Distort's near-vivisected body. Yellow vomited off to the
side, some of the seconds in the air who had hung back landed to do
the same.
That gave Puck pause, and with a growl he turned away angrily,
much to Carla's relief. "DAMN IT!" he screamed at the uncaring sky.
"What was the POINT!?" Suddenly, I saw he remembered something and
whirled in my direction. "YOU!!" he shouted, pointing at me as he
stomped my way. I retreated backwards cautiously. "You HAD to come
and 'put down the vigilante,' you son of a bitch! DAMN YOU! You
KNEW that asshole HAD to be unstable, yet you thought he was LESS
of a danger than ME? Maybe I have more power, brainiac, but at
least I have goddamn morals! And that murdering bastard DOES NOT!"
Puck threw his hands up in the air. "Well I have news for you, you
stupid moron! I am NOT going to put up with you fucking government
agents anymore!" His blood streaked face glared dangerously at me.
"You don't have a choice in the matter," I warned.
Puck stared at me, disbelieving. "I just don't bloody well
BELIEVE you; you've finally reached the edge of my patience here,
and you still spout GARBAGE at me!"
"It is NOT garbage! If need be, I will see to it that you are
put down, especially after what you did to Distort, admittedly
deserving of it, but that was WAY out of line." Puck glared at me,
and I glared back at him for a half-minute.
"I see I have to make a point here," he said finally as he
stared at me.
The hand that grabbed my neck surprised me, but Puck's true
self appeared as the hand's owner as the illusion he had left
behind vanished. I didn't resist knowing it would give him an
excuse to attack me and I was in a poor position TO resist. My
agents shouted, fearing Puck repeating his massacre of Distort's
limbs on me, but the elf stopped them with a raised hand as he
coldly stared into my eyes.
"I do blame you for starting this mess," he began frigidly,
"but the lady is right and killing isn't the answer. However," he
grimly went on, "I see that nothing I say will make an impression
on you, agent Stone. So let my actions speak louder than words."
"What?!" I demanded hoarsely, and I felt fear rise in me as it
hadn't in a long time when I saw Puck's eyes start to glow. His
hand at my neck began to glow too and the bright energy flowed onto
and into my body, reaching every portion, every fibre of myself.
The light built and I was glowing now as well as the light became
a consuming fire throughout my body. I heard someone scream.
Funny, I realized in a detached way as my awareness fell into
darkness and away from the burning light, I'M the one screaming.
Night fell.
* Try: Darkness decended upon him
OUTSIDE THE PIT...
When the intense light finally died, Carla turned around
cautiously and saw Puck release Stone, who fell limply to the
ground. The elf in turn staggered a little from whatever he had
done. Carla ran over, ignoring her companions' startled warnings
and quickly knelt by her superior and turned him over. She gasped.
"Oh my Lord," she whispered.
Erik, emotionally numb from everything, commented to no one in
particular, "If he wouldn't listen before, maybe this will change
things. Don't bother telling me it wasn't right either, right now
I just don't care," he said bleakly. "And if you'll pardon me, I
have people to release." Erik turned and walked towards the mud
pit.
* release whom from what?
Amp ran up when he left. "What did he mean, Carla?" She gasped
when she had a clear view of Stone. Carla agreed with her.
Stone was a woman now.
Everything that had been male about their leader was altered
into female lines. It was as if Stone had been born female instead
and this was his... HER natural form now. Formerly short white
hair now stretched beyond her shoulders and the strong, lean body
of the male Stone was now a supple, slender and womanly one. The
men's clothing she wore ill-fit her now-shorter body and smaller
frame.
Graviner stayed to keep watch on Distort but Yellow and Force
came over and gaped at what the Puck had done, as did more and more
of the freed second-level DOC agents who gasped or gawked in their
turn.
"Puck left," one reported eventually. Carla shook her head.
"What a mess," she sighed. Sadly, she looked over at the cape-
covered lump that had been Yvette Ranchard and closed her eyes
painfully. Puck was right in some respects, and one was Yvette's
* Try: some respects; one was
death being their fault. "Have someone take the... body, and get
that BASTARD," she spat the word, "Distort to a hospital so we can
try what's left of his sorry ass. Force, you carry Stone to the
* we can try save what's
cars, the change must've wiped her out. Everyone else, return the
non-DOC personel to their homes." Carla brushed some of Stone's
longer hair away from the new woman's face before standing
resolutely.
"Let's get back to base."
"Damn him!!" Erik yelled furiously into the night sky.
He stood on the roof of one of the taller buildings in
Winnipeg, but the spectacular view was the last thing on his mind.
Standing by the edge, he stared at the city skyline, fists clenched
at his side. In his current state, he didn't want to go home; Erik
was still far too mad and grief-stricken to do that.
Stone may not think what the elf had done to be acceptable,
but it had been the only thing Erik could do to stop himself from
killing the arrogant government man. Mad as he had been, he hadn't
wanted blood on his hands. Like Yvette's was; no matter how much he
knew it was mostly Stone's fault, part of the blame was his.
"Damn him..." Erik whispered as the anger fled, closing his
eyes as the tears slid down his angular face as the sorrow hit him
full-force. He stepped off the building's edge, normally a suicidal
move for most others.
No body hit the pavement below.
SECTION TWO - Wrath of Elves
For the next few days, Winnipeg murmured about the
confrontation between Puck and the American agents. The news of
Yvette Ranchard's death didn't go over well with the police or the
public. With the transformed Stone still unconscious, the DOC crew
flew back Stateside to be reassigned new duties.
Erik's reaction as Puck was quite plain as he stalked the
streets; woe to a criminal whom he spotted in the act. If it was
just one, then he got treated to a high-speed, high-altitude,
terror-filled flight through Winnipeg's highest buildings. But if
there were more than one, or if one of them had powers, Puck used
horrific illusions and they were ten times worse than the flights.
The guilty parties didn't know which way was up and were white as
sheets by the time the police arrived.
His parents and friends worried about him because he wouldn't
let go of the guilt he felt, no matter how much they tried; all
they could do was hope the normally sensible elf would get back to
normal. At midnight, the grim elf stopped at Puck's place and sip
a random drink. He had sourly found out alcohol didn't effect him
anymore, no matter how much he drank. Shadow, Wendy, and Nymph, his
usual friends at the club tried cheering him up as well, but they
too met with failure.
However, on the sixth, someone new arrived at the club....
VALERIE...
The bouncer at the entrance let me through with no trouble,
even though he stared at me as I passed by. Not that he could've
done much; being a somewhat muscular 'God' my strength was far
greater than his.
That thought made me reflect on the turmoil the first few
months of the new millennium had brought me. God, I wish what I had
done in March hadn't happened, but I couldn't magically change the
past. My power was fire, not making miracles, and so I'd have to
damn well live with it.
After my trial, most of my community time was spent helping
clear the rubble my fit of insanity had left behind. Finding tough
enough clothes to fit my seven foot plus height was also a chore,
but manageable. Fashion lost out to necessity. My strength and
endurance were pretty formidable and handling the larger and more
dangerous tasks of cleaning up mostly fell for me to handle. The
hard labour helped clear my mind; hiding in my room hadn't. This
* try: clear my mind that hiding in
conclusion forced me to face the fact that I couldn't just ignore
what I had become.
That meant using my power.
Time to practice it was permitted after some initial
hesitation, if just to help myself control it better. My enhanced
infra-red sight I'd gotten used to by that time; my fire was what
needed I practice with. Predictably, some brave, or foolish,
scientists came to study just what I could do and how hot my fires
were. They had read the reports, melting a car in instants wasn't
a simple feat, nor was destroying several blocks in one blast. The
mere fact that I had easily survived doing these feats astonished
them, but then, so were a lot of things happening in the world
today.
It certainly put a crimp in one's sex life.
Those same scientists are currently figuring out how to
measure my higher-power plasma; their instruments melted before I
even started trying hard. My control improved remarkably, my fire,
or even other fires I found out, went where I wanted it to go. I
could shape my plasma into crude shapes and time would only help.
Heaven help me, but I was actually beginning to enjoy it, with only
the shadow of the past dimming my thrill. The city council of
Edmonton, hearing of my improved control, had a bright idea and
loaned me out to where I could do more good.
Forest fires.
I was made for the job and it was a relief to be away from
Edmonton where I was constantly reminded of what I had done. This
time of year, the national and provincial parks got ready for
summer's usual outbreak of forest fires. In May, I proved myself as
I followed the first initially sceptical firefighter's
instructions. It was almost funny. At first they had me making
little firebreaks by aiming at the ground, which eventually got to
me so I headed for the source of the problem.
What could a forest fire do to me? I was invulnerable to
anything in the woods, the furnace-like heat was nothing to me, and
I could hold my breath for a very long time. I actually felt where
the hottest part of the problem was and headed right for it. Once
there... I cut loose.
The limited area firestorm I created vaporized the trees
fuelling the main blaze and winds rushed in to my location. The
superheated air rose like a jet, drawing in the surrounding air
from the drop in air pressure. I only stayed on the ground because
I was still unleashing a lesser amount of fire from my hands,
pushing me down and keeping me standing. The hot spot, burned
mostly away by a hotter flame, cooled rapidly and the fire fighters
were able to deal with the lesser blaze. I still helped a little
but I'd lessened the danger and got some respect from it.
I just wish my clothes would stop burning off; it's
embarrassing to say the least.
It was four days ago, when I'd asked for a break, that I
received the letter, which shocked and angered me once read, but I
* What was the letter about?
didn't know what to do about it. However, on the third, the events
of what happened in Winnipeg reached me, stunning me even more.
>From the brief time I had known Puck, I knew this to be something
^
* paragraph indent, I presume?
devastating to him. It would have for me. It was then I decided to
* Try: devastating to him ... it was for me.
* Try: devastating to him; it would have for me.
* If it did impact her, you might try the former line, the latter if
* she didn't know Yvette at all.
do something about both problems, first to talk to Puck and then to
get him to help me with the second.
* I presume that this concerned the letter ...
Unfortunately, my hopes fell when I saw him at the bar. Not
drunk, I'd found out about the extreme resistance to alcohol, but
he looked so sullen and melancholy that I feared this wasn't going
to be easy. Seeing the empty seats around him, I decided to be bold
and plunked myself down right beside my fellow fourth.
"Hey, what are you doing looking so glum?" I spoke aloud in an
offhand manner. He started and snapped his head around to stare at
me, eyes widening in recognition and surprise as he took in my
tall, jumpsuit-wearing form.
"Val!" he exclaimed as he looked me over. "Didn't seem like
you, what with wearing clothes and all."
I flushed, and glowered at the smirking elf. "Casual wear
doesn't come in ASBESTOS, you jerk! Unlike some people, I have to
buy what I can get, and burning mostly custom-made stuff off costs
money."
"True," he admitted. Having gotten him off his dismal musings
with my sudden appearance, Puck seemed more pleasant and normal.
"How are you doing in the public service?"
"All right. They haven't told the newspapers yet, somehow, but
I've been working on stopping forest fires."
"That sounds like backward progress to me," he said drolly.
"Funny man. No, I burn out the hotter parts and it slows down
the fire a lot. Fighting fire with fire you might say."
"I would too," he chuckled, making me roll my eyes.
Unfortunately, he seemed to remember the reason he was in the bar
and his expression visibly darkened. "So, just visiting a friend?
I'm not exactly pleasant company now." I can see that, I thought.
"Yeah, I..." I hesistated, "heard about that. But it didn't
sound like it was your fault, Puck."
"Oh, it was my fault she got killed all right," he said
through gritted teeth, looking down at his glass. "Mine and those
idiot DOC people, but I'M the one who should've been more careful,
or just avoided the whole damn situation SOMEHOW!" His empty hand
slammed the bar's serving area lightly, but it still vibrated all
the way down, making the rest of the drinkers and a few passers-by
stare at the unconcerned and preoccupied elf.
* Unconcerned? Is that the word you really want to use?
* It doesn't go well with "preoccupied"
Startled, I drew back a bit at his reaction, but quickly
reassumed my normal posture. "I'm still recovering from what I did,
you'll get over it."
"You were out of your MIND then!" he snapped, glaring at me.
"I wasn't before she was..." He swallowed, then with a bitter tone
went on. "I lost it a little after, and I'm not happy to find out
I was capable of doing what I did."
I blinked, Distort's condition was listed only as serious in
the news I heard. "You mean punching him around? He'll be..."
"I cut off three of his limbs, Val!" he hissed, and I froze,
involuntarily gasping a little. "That much loss doesn't grow back
on its own on most thirds who don't have that kind of power, or so
it's been found. He'll need a powerful healer's help, like Betty,
to replace them, and won't get it as it keeps that psychopath under
control."
I stared at the fierce countenance on Puck's face. It wasn't
in my scope of expertise to help him, but he was the only one I
trusted and with an interest to help me with the first problem.
"Funny you should mention Betty," I started neutrally as he turned
his eyes back to his drink.
"Why?" he said without looking up. I took a deep breath.
"She's been kidnapped."
The glass shattered in the elf's suddenly clenched fist.
WASHINGTON, D.C.
"I want my body BACK, god damn it!!" THUMP!!
Everett sighed wearily as he contemplated the dent the now-
female, and extremely furious Stone had made in his steel desk with
her fist. Looking up into the familar, yet different, face of his
agent and friend, he contemplated his response. Agents Micheal
Rivers and Cathy Brown were seated behind Stone, concerned about
the state of the white-haired woman's mind.
Not that Stone had any reason to be happy with his... er, her
situation. She had lain unconscious for two days before groggily
waking up to find out what the Puck had done to her. She was
initally horrified, then went into a berserk rage that turned the
* berzerker rage perhaps?
hospital room she had been occupying, as well as the entire section
she had been in, into a replica of an Ice Age. It had taken Agent
Graviner to hold her and Force to knock her out. The damage was
repairable, but Stone had been in dire need of emotional support.
Agent Takahashi had provided that. After hearing the reports,
the second-generation Japanese-American had rushed over to get
Stone back on her feet. Mostly by saying what could be done, could
be undone. The cold-wielding agent had calmed enough after hearing
that to visit Everett. But with appropriate clothing, marginally,
for her new sex.
The deshevelled, angry appearence of Stone would have been
funny under other circumstances, but not now.
"We can't do that, Stone," Everett said finally, shaking his
head.
The arctic-blue eyes belied their cool color by burning with
a raging fury kept barely in check. The temperature of the room
dropped a little, and everyone save Stone noticed it. She gathered
enough control to grit out her question.
"Why...NOT?" she grated out through her teeth. Micheals piped
up.
"Firstly, you dumbass, we don't HAVE anyone who can DO what
was done to you," he said. "Secondly, the scientists think that the
strain that knocked you out was your own power resisting the change
Puck was forcing on your body. One of the simplest things he could
have done was to change you into a woman."
"What?!?" Stone demanded as she whirled on Michael,
disbelieving what she had just heard. "LOOK at me!" she exclaimed
furiously, indicating her female contours. "Is this SIMPLE?!"
"Actually, from what I've heard, yes. All the Puck likely did
was change all the Y chromosomes in your body to X and then your
own body helped in the process by following your new DNA. Puck's
new to his power; changing a third who seems to have a resistance
to change must've been difficult. So he must have instinctively
gone for the simple approach." Michael pointed at the immobile form
of Stone, and finished with, "This is what you would have looked
like if you had been born female, Stone."
<Yes! This is as far as I've gotten! B>
Twister.
The Good:
* Puck is a very complex character - he didn't want all of this to happen
to him, and yet he wish he had more power to do more ...
* Stone is a vindictive person ... he hates Puck with a 'passion' and
does a good job of rationalizing his actions. I would see no reason
why anyone but drug pushers would hate Puck, and yet I kinda (in a twisted
mixed up sort of way) understand Stone's position. He's definitely
suffers from a legalistic, stuck up mentality. He doesn't try to reason
with Puck but instead tries to use hard-line tactics like force. It
would not put it above him to try and use a tactical nuke on Puck.
The Bad:
* Grammar as usual :)
* I still dislike the rather abrupt transitions and POV switches. I
like the differing POV's, but I wish there could be a transition between
them. This may be difficult, if not impossible to do since you have
such a high rate of POV switches, compared to other novels.
* I still don't have a feel for Carla and her powers, other than that she
is a third and can make force shields.
* Puck needs to make money? I'm kinda surprised that he doesn't just
make diamonds or turn lead into gold with his transformation powers
I would think that money is the least of his concerns.
and the Neutral (there's nothing ugly here)
* More parts! More parts!
* What ever happened to Puck and Jennifer? it seemed that their
* relationship is back to nothing.
Hints/ideas:
* Who would/could possible kidnap Betty?
* Don't forget about Dr. Young's usenet post
* Mid-June?
* No alien invasions, please (don't want to make it cornier than the
state of Iowa)
* What will Distort do? Will he be terrified out of his mind or will
* he try to strike back with a vengance? It is quite apparent that
even his Amp-ed power is only enough to hurt Puck. His reason should
tell him that without serious aid, there is no way he can disable
Puck. Then again, he is rather insane ... he might just go for the
revenge routine ... provided he can get around.
* It'll be interesting if some new 3rd has the power of electronic
manipulaation. This char could potentially wreck havoc with the
world's electronic exchange system. He/she could probably cause all of
the world's stock markets to crash. Considering that this takes place
around yr 2000, there must have been plenty of child computer prodigys,
some malicious.
* It is possible to create lots of characters with elemental powers, but
I caution restraint on the creation of new chars, otherwise it could
end up reading like the X-Men comics (whether that is good or bad, I'll
leave that up to you).
* Make sure that you keep your chars 3 dimentional. It is very easy to
create a generic char with powers. It is much more difficult but
much more interesting to give them feelings/emotions/aspirations/hurts/
etc. Val's insanity / Stone's coldness / Puck's weirdness :) are
good examples. Runner was a flatter char, but adequate for a background
char. However, Yvette and Betty were too flat, considering their
roles. Without knowing more about Yvette, the audience would have a
harder times feeling for her loss. In other words, without her
contributing more, it is hard to feel for her loss. The same applies
for Betty, but I imagine that you'll be using/describing her much more
once the kidnapping plot thread goes underway.
* Keep in mind that all "evil" people cannot be evil for it's own sake ...
they must have an ulterior motive.
* I would expect some of the more subtle people to get at Puck by getting
at his friends and family. He has made himself quite visible ... sooner
or later, someone is going to kidnap/hurt some of his friends/family.
He is careful not to reveal the connection between Eric and Puck, but
I would think that maybe Jennifer or her friends-in-gossip might know
this.
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