I don't know how helpful my criticism is, but here are what I
perceived as blemishes to the good story I enjoyed tonight.
1) in Ranma's death-battle with the realtors at the beginning, it read as
if all of the bad guys were down, except one, and that he and Ranma took
each other out. Even with Ranma (or more importantly because of Ranma)
died then, I'd have expected Souun to disarm them, and nabiki calling the
cops and an ambulance. some more explanation for how the killers got away
would help
2) I would have expected some police investigation for Ranma's death at
least in the background, and some police protectors guarding the dojo, or
an explanation why.
c) when the last pair of badguys stopped at the office, and found the
corpse, I would have expected Ranma to strike once there, instead of
giving them time to get to the dojo.
"I've never been good at indexing." -- George Carlin --
4) I like the dialogues with the crow, but the last one between it and
akane confused me. I never saw the movie, but what dead did Akane strike
with the crow? Did the crow just gift Ranma with a new life? Or is their
new child affianced to princess Kurama of the karasutengu?
Neil Reynolds