Good, as always. Some small plot holes, but nothing major.

Two mistakes......

You have the virus makers issue a manifest, which is a list of a ship's
cargo. I believe you mean to say manifesto.

In one paragraph, you have Akira showing pictures, an occurance wot
doesn't quite fit the rest of the fic. Did you mean Akari?

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