Author's D'oh: [1] and [2] are the male and female protagonists from ER.
Unfortunately, I can't think of their names right now.  This is especially
dumb on my part because I live with three Med students.

        Another cool chapter, I don't watch ER so I can't say that I know
the names either.  I like the concept of the ER conversation but it will
need an authors note at least.

       *Not now, Little Kitten,* he said as he jumped beside her.  *For
now, I need you to hold my umbrella.*

        It might help to mention it's still raining at some point in the
first half since Mousse changes back.  I was starting to wonder up to the
part with the umbrella.

       Man-made thunder shook the night as he pulled the trigger of the
shotgun he'd hid up his sleeve.

        I've always considered Mousse to be the most likely to have a
shotgun, perhaps it would help to have him whip it out from a sleeve before
firing.  I hope for their sakes it's loaded with some good dragonslayer
material.
        Whelp.. until chapter 11 I suppose.

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