Skuld smiled.  "Not like them.  I'm nothing like my sister, nor do I
want to be.  But yes, Keiichi, I do see that future for us.  I see
                     ^^^^^^^

Anou....  Kore wa KENJI-san, ne?

Aargh...edit, edit, edit...

"Because Urd won't do it.  She says that if they called her a maid
of honor, it would be a besmirch on her character.  So she suggested
you instead."

Besmirch is a verb....  It would besmirch her character, OR it would be a
(mark, black spot, whatever) on her character.

erase, erase, erase...

The response was immediate.  "Because you're taking away my son!  I've
raised him for thirty years, and now he's gone and fallen in love
with you!

THIRTY YEARS?!?  How the hell long has he been at Nekomi?  Zen assumed that
he was a freshman, or at most a sophomore when he met Belldandy, and if
this is three years later, he'd be 21 or 22....  Is Mrs. Morisato that
prone to exaggeration?

Twenty, sorry.  I think I ingested one of Urd's potions before posting the
rewrite...

Keiichi looked at his goddess...no, last time he called her that.  He
looked at his *wife* with more love than he thought he could possibly

Last time?  Why?  The two aren't mutually exclusive or anything...

Because neither should worship the other now that they are married.  It's
a crutch that will lead to bad things.

Zen really liked this last scene with Kenji and Skuld.

Zen liked this story very much!

Well, Sean thanked Zen in the credits!

Thanks again for catching my mistakes...

--Sean Gaffney
--"You git!  I thought you were dead!  Git git git!" - Benny, No Future