Mr. the Rutsch wrote:
 

Hold On
by: Jeff Rutsch

     I would appreciate all comments and suggestions.  Flames are welcome,
as long as they're verbose ^_^.  Or just if you liked the story, I'd
appreciate being told.

Well, it's one screwed up marraige! Poor Kasumi.

Your rational of why and how it happend and the way you lead the reader 
along is excellent and believable. I've got to say I didn't like it, but 
could believe it and see it happening. If you look at the Tendo family 
in reality, Kasumi displays the most symptoms of a troubled and 
tramatized personality.
 

Thanks for reading,

Thanks for sharing!

Windlily

(dragoncritterlisteningtotheDragonsdream@theCelestialTemple.com)