| Subject: [Comment] [FFML] "Hold On" [fanfic] |
| From: tlsbtn@ix.netcom.com (Trisha Lynn Sebastian) |
| Date: 8/27/1996, 3:40 PM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
Once again, another fine piece of work you have there, Jeff. No glaring problems with grammar or spelling or punctuation. The one thing I was confused with was what Kasumi was talking about in the beginning of the piece, but after a while, it straightened itself out. Keep up the good work. Foxtrot the Furryous, BTFH