TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES PT 5-6  
by Jeff Rutsch
*Grammar:  7
*Story: 7 amusing
*Characters: 7
*Humor: 6
*Overall: 8 I like Jeff's stories.  They are a good break from
the norm.

RANMA 1/2:  Kasumi's Story
by Karl Rim
*Grammar: 6  Karl left out some periods, commas and other
punctuation mistakes.  Also, Karl wasn't clear when some of the
scenes were changed.  It became a little confusing.
*Story:  8  Kasumi gets nasty story.  I liked it a lot, but he
was going away from the plot near the end. 
*Characters: 8 Very much like the anime, but they were not the
manga.  Who cares about that.  I think this fanfic started and
analyzed that "Kasumi the strong and must keep the family
together," type story.  Anybody know who that woman was at the
end?  Anybody?!
*Humor: 7
*Drama: 6
*Overall: 8 Great read.  As a Kasumi fan, loved it.

HOLD ON
by Jeff Rutsch
*Grammar: 8
*Story: 9  Very nice. 
*Characters: 8  You handled them very well.  Realistic in a way
and you really know the character's thoughts.
*Drama: 7
*Lemon: 1
*Overall: 9  Just like Mr. Lawson said, this is a great contender
for the "Best Ranma Fic of 1996,"  along with _Heart of the
Family_.  The end part with Tofu and Kasumi seemed a little
rushed, I don't know if you did that on purpose.  But that's the
only problem I saw, except maybe you should clean up the
dialogues a little bit at the dinner scene.