Wow, good story.  I'm only passingly familiar with "The Crow" but that didn't
keep me from enjoying the story.  My only nitpick (and it's a very tiny one
at that) is that I think that Ranma should have been a little more nervous
proposing to Akane.  His shift from uncertainty, wondering "Gee, who do I
pick?" to total confidence seemed a bit sudden.  Maybe have him stutter a
bit, and then grant him the calm collectiveness once the deed is done.

The funeral was good.  Ryoga's speech was my favorite.  Very touching.  I did
want to see more reaction to Ranma's homecoming, but that might ruin the
excellent tone of the story.

On the whole, well done.

Oh, and in regards to this and your other darkfic stories, either you're not
as sick as you think, or I'm in trouble.  ^_^

Krista