Travis Butler Wrote:

I think the thing that bothered me the most was the way Noriko seemed so
pig-headedly fixated on the One True Cause of the paper's problems. :)
For someone as intelligent as she apparently is (I liked the bit at the
beginning: "STOP SPREADING RUMORS" <g>), she's too unwilling to look for
all the ramifications of the paper's situation -- once she found herself
a not-quite-scapegoat in Ranma, she seemed satisfied to let it rest there
without checking out the rest of the situation.

This is why Zen asked the following question, actually!  ^_^

Tell Zen, does Noriko have any Kunou blood in her?

Zen will be eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Now, to borrow from Noriko, Get your butt in gear and write more of it! ^_^

Seconded. :)

(Sorry, Raphael, for not doing a full C&C on this one yet; I set it aside
to do when I finished the rest of the message backlog, then saw this and
couldn't help responding. <Sigh>)

Zen the Heretic-