Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF][Ranma] Scoop of the Day, Chapter 2
From: tlsbtn@ix.netcom.com (Trisha Lynn Sebastian)
Date: 8/25/1996, 10:05 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

The author wrote: 

On Fri, 23 Aug 1996, Zen wrote:


Zen likes it... your dialogue is getting even better!  The 
characterization
is excellent as well, though Zen notices that the reporters are not 
telling
Noriko that Ranma tried to save their sorry butts. *sigh*  Ahh well, 
that's
the media for you!
   Hmm...I think you have something there. I did insert that little 
protest Suzuki made, but it might not be enough. Let it be suffice 
that 
Noriko is beyond rationality at this point in time, anyway. I'll go 
back 
and fix that.

I'm confused here.  I thought you said that they couldn't
remember much of what happened?  It would make
sense that after being hit with a shockwave, millions
of tiny bits of concrete and a Kasumi-shocked Tofu,
that the two reporters can hardly remember what happened.
I thought that having them barely remember was intentional
on your part.  It made sense to me.


---
Raphael See




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