That night, Gosunkugi was relaxing in his room.  He had built a
small display, putting his straw dolls, hammer and nail, and the
candles he wore strapped to his head in it, all remnants of the old
Gosunkugi.  "Boy, those old mages sure had a sense of humor, putting
these silly things into their spells to make them fail."  Gosunkugi
shook his head at that, chuckling under his breath.
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Umm... well, that's a Shinto thing, nothing to do with 'magic' as
you seem to use it ... Gos is more of a wannabe Shinto priest...
And the ONLY 'magic' that he has actually done went right, as far
as causing it to work goes - the paper dolls. The only other thing
he does is the juujuu dolls with the hammer and nails. (And his
NAME is named after the nails he uses)...

What he and Cologne do are nothing alike at all... And he's never
recited a magic spell ... Unless 'Die Saotome!' is a spell. ;p

But other than that, it's an interesting story, but it needs work
on stuff, like the vortex and all...

Kun-chan...