databank@mindspring.com (Zen) wrote:

Sean Gaffney Wrote:

"Don't worry, brother.  Even if I didn't know that Belldandy was a
goddess, the one thing that was always clear was that you two loved
each other.  She'll say yes."

"It's not as simple as that, Skuld.  I'm asking a *goddess* to marry

                              ^^^^^
Anou... Zen thinks you mean "Megumi", ne?

me, for heaven's sake!  There are consequences that you wouldn't

     ^^^ ^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^
Literally! ^_^

believe.  I'm not really sure if it's even her decision."  Keiichi
sighed again.  "But I had to ask her, anyway.  Just to let her know,
if for nothing else."

Megumi said nothing, the two of them just sat, looking at the door
to the bedrooms.

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Oh, this is delightful!  Zen will be eagerly awaiting the sequels.

Very well done!

It is very well done isn't it? This has to be one of the best fics for the year
that I've seen so far.