My review of New Horizons 2/2

Overall:  Not bad, I missed part one, but I did notice a tendancy toward
the 'mysterious' fact or plot twist that popped in unannounced, patching
up a plot problem.

Grammar And Spelling:  It seems to be good grammer, but there were
characters that seemed to be replaced with commas, most noticably the
work Fiance, where the 'E' was replaced with a comma.  This occurs
throughout the entire fic, as far as I can tell.

Characters:  For the most part, all of the 'Ranmaesque' humor has been
transferred to Jeff, causing many of the mainline characters to 'grow
up', solving most of their problems.  Not bad, per se, but it made them
seem a little less active than usual.

General:  I gather that in part one, Nabiki wanted to marry Jeff, even
though she thought he was broke.  However, all that gets solved when we
find out that Jeff is, in fact, filthy rich.  Once again the 'suprise'
that makes everything Ok.  Another is Nabiki, all of a sudden, claiming
clan birthright.  However, all in all, it was a good fic, and I will be
waiting for Part three.

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