Okay, here's part two. This didn't come out quite the way I would
have liked it to, and I'm kinda dissatisfied with it. Any suggestions?
Again, *any* comments or criticism would be appreciated (even a simple
"Never write anything again" will do).

WAI!!  As before, Mihoshi likes it!!  Mihoshi is responding a bit late, but
none the less, Mihoshi is responding!  More!  More!!  Mihoshi likes the
angle of a Furinkan newspaper!!  Please keep it up!  If Mihoshi could think
of some way to improve your work, she would say, but honestly likes it and
can't think of anything off hand.  Mihoshi can actually picture most of
this animated, very nice style. ^^;  And Mihoshi would stalk anyone who
would tell you not to write again, it's good so far! ^^;
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* Mihoshi@crashing her ship through the Tendou Dojo, "Oops, sorry..."