----------
From: Twister
Sent: Sunday, August 18, 1996 3:12 PM
To: Fan List
Subject: [FFML] Twisted Path 3 [38-41][beta]
Hi! I fixed what comments I got for 30-37 so I'm sending this to make sure
the rest of part 3 is checked. As always C+C welcome!
If I get nothing back I send this sucker to RAAC. ;) (shock people to see
Part 3 right after Part 2 ^_^)
I'll wait until it's okay to post. Then..... POW!
Twister
Hmm... Cool fic'. I'm glad you intend on continuing the series. I did notice
that maybe Sylia was a little 'weak' when the copy of Nene was killed. I would
expect her response to be a bit like Twisters (She gets royally pissed off.)
instead of her breaking down and crying. Later.
Draxon-X@msn.com