On Thu, 22 Aug 1996, Richard Lawson wrote:

I like this so far.  It follows the old and somewhat tired formula of
"magic potion fed to Ranma causing unpredictable side effects", but does
it in a unique and thoughtful way.  The characters are good (although
I'd expect a more violent reaction from Akane at Ranma's enjoyment of
Shampoo's food).  You writing style is excellent.  It'll be interesting
to see where you go with this.

	I'm saving the more violent reaction for what happens next...

	SKJAM!