| Subject: Re: [FFML] (fanfic) (Ranma) Neko-Philia 1/? |
| From: Richard Lawson |
| Date: 8/22/1996, 9:55 AM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
I like this so far. It follows the old and somewhat tired formula of "magic potion fed to Ranma causing unpredictable side effects", but does it in a unique and thoughtful way. The characters are good (although I'd expect a more violent reaction from Akane at Ranma's enjoyment of Shampoo's food). You writing style is excellent. It'll be interesting to see where you go with this.