Wow, this story gripped my interest pretty fast.

I'll have to agree with Richard, though, that Akane's temper is a
little exaggerated here.  Either let Ranma get out of line more,
or tone down her trigger-happyness.

You have me eagerly awaiting the next part.  Good work.


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