Subject: [FFML][C&C]More Strangeness
From: Slashtooth@evnet.com
Date: 8/20/1996, 4:46 AM
To: Fanfic@fanfic.com

Interesting.  Although Gos (when knoecked into the pot) heard a meow,
and then thought it was a dog?  Just a minor point there.  An
interesting sideline note... What if Cologne's cure involves, mayhap,
placing Gos under a curse?  Seperating the half form he is in into two
forms... 

	I liked the part where Gos used his new forn to antagonize Ranma, but
his constant pining for Akane during the time he is near her gives lie
to the fact that he has admitted defeat.  Mahap something along the
lines of.... 'I must try that spell again.  Now I know there is someone
out there that can move me the way Akane can.'  It would keep most of
the flow, Gos could still Antagonise Ranma (Let's face it, whenever
ANYONE gets the chance to antagonize Ranma without fear of his reprisal,
they TAKE it!}, and still conveys the feelings that Gos has for Akane.

All in all, a good 'fic.  Keep it up, and keep 'em coming!
-- Slashtooth@evnet.com Remeber, No matter where you go, there you are. - Buckaroo Banzai Applicant to the Holy Order of Ukyo - Okonomiyaki's Anonymous. Sig File Under Construction.