Very well done 'fic IMHO.  The only thing I really find a problem with in
the fic is here. 

    Shampoo lowered her eyes in contrition.  "Aiya.  I sorry,
great-grandmother.  I know dangerous, but nothing else work.  No
mushrooms, no passion spice...  We try everything, and still
Ranma no leave violent pervert-girl, Akane."

    Cologne heaved a sigh of exasperation.  "I still don't see
why you don't just kill the girl and get on with it.  You've
given her the kiss of death, have you not?  Why are you so
reluctant to do this the simple way?  Why must we be reduced to
meddling with dark magics?"

Since when does Cologne defer to Shampoo?  This isn't how the two normally
relate.  Cologne plans and orders, Shampoo does. 

-Josh 
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