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From: 	Oni
Sent: 	Friday, August 09, 1996 12:10 AM
To: 	fanfic@fanfic.com
Subject: 	[FFML] [Fanfic] Ranma 1/2:  Enter Perfume  Chapter 8--Fini

        A note from the Author:  Okay, before you read this chapter, I need
                        
to make sure you all understand that I never intended to offend anyone with

this story.  Nor did I ever intend for what happens here, to happen.  But, 
as many of you authors know, things never turn out the way we plan it, do  
they?  Just please keep an open mind and don't get too pissed.  I know 
I'm going to get flamed, won't be the first time, so nyah!!! 
                         
                        Ranma 1/2:  Enter Perfume 
   Chapter 8:  Fini!  Flames will be laughed at, so, go ahead and try it! 


I read this series and I enjoyed it up until this part. Somehow I think you 
made the ending a bit too abrupt. You also completely went against the 
Akane/Ranma relationship with chapter 8. You said yourself that Ranma loved 
Akane and then had him simply accept Perfume when he should have at least 
tried to explain to Akane.

Overall I think the series was O.K. where it would have been good if you 
hadn't just 'slapped' the ending in there.

(It's not too late, say that this was a 'test' ending and make the real one 
real quick, nobody will hurt you...badly.)


Draxon-X (Author of about 50,000 un-released fanfics, when asked "why didn't 
you release them?" he says: "Because, revision # 2,537,865 isn't done yet!")

PS If you think I am trashing your work, you will have your chance for revenge 
when I release a BGC fanfic I'm currently working on. (I will post an 'ad' for 
it sometime soon, to see if people hate my basic idea :)